In starting 2-3chapters. I felt bored. It wasn't seems much interesting but later on as situations and circumstances starts changing. Story seems interesting.
✑ Cover
It's simply good. Name, characters, everything is good. But you could have add a bit about the rivalry like angry face or broken face of leads.
✑ Title
It's describes about your plot perfectly. But seems common.
✑ Prologue/blurb
There is no prologue.
✑ Plot idea
Plot is attractive. It clearly describes about the revenge and the cliffhangers you added that made me curious to read further on. The suspense of revenge is main thing which attracts most in plot.
✑ Description
I felt it's not complete as per plot. You could have add something like about Rival more which can attract readers more.
✑ Character development
Chapter after chapter character development was changing in good way for main characters.About supportive and other characters it was a bit confusing as there was no description or any clear introduction about them.
✑ Writing Style
Lack of emotions was there. This was a negative point in book. Along with dialogue mention of emotions helps the readers in easy imagination.
✑ Suggestions
As per above review. I want to suggest you give the proper introduction of all characters whether they are main leads or not. As it will help to show the bonds easily. Try to add emotions, expression along with dialogue.
✑ Overall review
Book was interesting to read as the twists was taking places making readers curious.
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