It is nice as the concept is different yet unique one. So you can say it worked really nicely.
✑ Cover
Cover is working but it can be better than this one as per the story.
✑ Title
Title is good and it all way work with the book idea.
✑ Prologue/blurb
Prologue is all way good and more expressive. But still it worked as tge dialogues were the main thing you wrote.
✑ Plot idea
It is unique and you know that the title of your book says a lot or you can say everything about your book. I personally loved the idea as i never came across one such unique idea.
✑ Description
You describe the emotions well. The description you give is all way ok. I loved the way you describe the emotions of the characters.
✑ Character development
All the characters are different and all have their own interest in it. And the way you express avu's character is all way loved by me.
✑ Writing Style
The way you write is proper and all way working. So no changes.
✑ Suggestions
Zero dude as you really did a well work.
✑ Overall review
As we go through everything then all things work over here. Everything is perfect at its place so no need of change. I liked the plot idea as it was a great one.
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