It was really good. After reading the character sketch I was too thrilled to read next.
✑ Cover
The line on top was too attractive. I really like when someone mention their username in the cover, it is eye catching.
✑ Title
It goes completely with story, COMING TO YOU depicts the eagerness, desperateness for eachother.
✑ Prologue/blurb
It did nothing but added anxiousness for me to read more and comparatively faster.
✑ Plot idea
I really liked the bonds. Male protagonist being simple fatger and female protagonist being a girl who just goes in working to avoid her past but still both don't forget their families. I appreciate that you showed it real, the real slow growing bond.
✑ Description
When I read description, it really gave me ifea of how the story would be and when I read it, it was as same as described. It was really good.
✑ Character development
Characters were well maintained. Everything that was required was very well given.
✑ Writing Style
The words used were really well choosen. Vocabulary was really good. The way you described everything was pretty good.
✑ Suggestions
Cover that you used is pretty good but if you add the characters in the cover it would be pretty eye catching.
✑ Overall review
I loved the story. I just loved the words used. The absolute slow growing relationship was portrayed. I think you should have added some leaps in the start otherwise readers may lose interest in between.
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