𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒 : 𝐂𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐃
So, what is your OC like?
Are they realistic and original, or cliché and overpowered?
In this book, I'll review your OC, and show you if they're good or bad!
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OC BY HELPFANDOM ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔ NOTES Sept 27, 2021: I'll put the image up later, since I can't find it for some reason.
WARNINGS None.
Chosen by me and the owner of thisoc. ▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔▔
Original universe: Earth except into the future where humanity has advanced to where they make part or half animal humans. They started creating Them that way the government could make superhumans to go to war. We're off to a good start! I haven't seen anything like this before so good originality and the worldbuilding already seems great. Plus, the world itself is quite interesting on it's own, and allows very diverse and unique character designs!
Name: Todd or to the scientists, Test 81. No surname. Nice name! Todd is a short, catchy, and not a complicated name. Todd's other name (Test 81), and the fact that he doesn't have a surname, also make sense.
Pronouns: He/Him
Species: Half human, Half green rat snake. I know many people would make their character be half cat or half wolf or something, so it's great to see that Todd is part snake. It's even better that you specified the species! (That might help when choosing appearance or powers.)
Status: Alive
Age: 14 (Green rat snakes only live to be 15-20 so he'll only be 24 at max age) Aww... he has such a short life:( Apart from that, this is a good disadvantage for being half animal (having the same lifespan as the animal the person is mixed with). Good work!
Dob: April 15 ????
Height: 5'2 (I wanted him to be short but green rat snakes are 5'0 to 5'8 feet.)
Weight: 80lbs (More snake like stomach) Good reason for Todd's very light weight! Does it effect his appearance though? Like maybe he has a thinner or snake-like body? Or that Todd is very agile? Chances are someone with a snake-like stomach won't have the same body has an average human.
Fears: Autophobia. In case anyone doesn't know, autophobia means a fear of being alone (you don't have to add this if you don't want to).
It's a good fear for your character to have, and would prove useful in character development and to make more tension (which, when written well, will make others want to continue your book/roleplay).
However, adding more fears will make Todd more realistic. At least 4 fears (in total) would work well. These fears should be a mix of major ones (like being alone, failure, losing loved ones, etc) and minor ones (like needles, the dark, insects, etc). Keep in mind that minor fears can still be useful when creating tension, wholesome scenes, making characters more relatable etc.
