𝐔𝐍𝐈𝐕𝐄𝐑𝐒𝐄
Creepypasta.
𝐁𝐀𝐒𝐈𝐂
Creepypasta Name: Party Animal
What a unique name!
Actual name: Christian Wendale
Title: Mister
Religion: not religious at the moment
Reason or meaning of name:
Also known as/ Nickname: Chris
Reason for nickname: Hates it when people ask: Like the religion?
Date of birth: July 29
Age:37
Age of death (If applicable):21Many creepypasta characters are teenagers. It's nice seeing an adult character. Good job on the originality!
Date of death (If applicable): August 7.
Gender (If applicable): male
Species: dead human
Birthplace: Durham, North Carolina
Current location: Slender Forest
Age:37(as of right now)
Age they appear:early 20s
Makes sense, since Christian died at around 21.𝐀𝐏𝐏𝐄𝐀𝐑𝐀𝐍𝐂𝐄
Body build: average
Explain more. There's a lot of bodies that are considered to be average. Does Christian have slight abs or a soft stomach? What shape is his body (rectangle, triangle, inverted triangle, oval, etc)? If Christian's ribcage shows, then how visible is it? You can research more about describing bodies to provide a better description. These are just a few examples to consider.
Glasses or contacts (If applicable): needs reading glasses.
Overall attractiveness: 6.5/10(he used way too much plastic surgery)
Usual fashion of dress: fancy
Favorite outfit (If applicable): buttondowns or sweaters + sweatpants.
Jewelry or accessories: does a necktie count? Also wears a black party hat with mouse ears attached.
Tattoo(s): none
Scar(s): Lots and lots of them, especially on the head and stomach.
Posture: straight-backed
Usual clothing: sweaters or button downs
Hair colour: blond(bleached)What's his natural hair color?
Hair length (Short, medium, long etc.): short
Explain Christian's hairstyle. Is it wavy? Is it straight? Does he have banks? Does he have an undercut? Is his hair in a specific hairstyle?
Eye colour: brown
Height:5'9
Weight: 150 lbs
Skin tone: greyish-tanChristian has a basic explanation of his appearance. What would make it better is to explain it more, providing descriptions for some of his traits.
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Good Personality traits: Actually minds his own business, can be surprisingly loyal, isn't too gullible(but his vengefulness can be used against him)
Bad personality traits: holds grudges a lot, cynical, has a bad attitude, vengeful
Christian's personality has both it's good and bad traits. It's a good start. However, it's lacking details, and is somewhat plain at the moment.
Every trait, doesn't matter if it's good or bad, is a double-edged sword. For example, if a character is selfish, chances are they're also confident about themselves and know their worth. Another example is if a character is cautious they'll probably survive in dangerous situations and avoid useless risks, but they may also panic in unexpected situations.
What is the good in Christian's bad traits? What is the bad in Christian's good traits? Figuring that out will improve his personality and make him a more realistic character.
Adding a few more personality traits, that aren't related to the method above, would improve Christian's personality even more. Here's some you can consider:
- Calm
- Awkward
- Quiet
- Rational
- Impulsive
- Creative
- Aloof
- Cold
- Insensitive
- Ignorant
- Polite
- Easily bored
- Emotional
- Ambitious
- Passionate
- Selfish
- Observant
- Manipulative
- Sneaky
- Blunt
Mood character is most often in: sour af
Sense of humour: loves making book references or dark jokes.
Characters greatest joy in life: reading or sleeping or using his phone
Why?: He's more of an introvert and keeps to himself.
Characters greatest fear: claustrophobia
Why?: Hates being cornered, and getting stuck in tight places. Also doesn't want to be crushed. He got it from his uncle.
What an interesting fear! It's sure to cause tension. Make sure that Christian has other fears, though. Try adding a few minor fears (insects, the dark, loud noises, etc) and at least one major fear (failure, going insane, losing loved ones, etc).
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Random𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒 : 𝐂𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐃 So, what is your OC like? Are they realistic and original, or cliché and overpowered? In this book, I'll review your OC, and show you if they're good or bad!