𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖𝐒 : 𝐂𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐄𝐃
So, what is your OC like?
Are they realistic and original, or cliché and overpowered?
In this book, I'll review your OC, and show you if they're good or bad!
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FANDOM ↪ mha/bnha
BASIC
Name ;; Kami A short and unique name!
Name Meaning ;; Japanese word for paper This matches with Kami's species and backstory.
Hero Name ;; Colorful Matches with Kami's quirk.
Race ;; N/A
Gender ;; Genderless
Pronouns ;; it/he/xey I might've used the pronouns wrong, so feel free to correct me.
Age ;; Technically 4 years old, but is actually ageless This part will be explained in the backstory section.
Sexuality ;; Panromantic, asexual Nice and diverse, all is cool here!
Like always, there isn't much to say in these sections. Kami seems to be an interesting character though.
PERSONALITY
↪Very odd and curious. Kami enjoys meeting new people to learn about them, though its appearance is known to weird them out. Xey have some trouble understanding emotions.
What kind of emotions does Kami have trouble with the most? Why? What kind of emotions does Kami understand the most? Why?
He rarely talks because it's difficult to form sentences, and xey can't control the volume. Xeir voice is extremely distorted and loud like TV static noise, and occasionally mispronounces words. Kami prefers to communicate through body language, and only resorts to talking if it can't get its point across. It loves to read for information. He is mostly peaceful and only wants to learn more about everything, but can become very aggressive if provoked. It's not very easy to anger xem because xey don't feel emotions in a normal way, but if you attack it, he will fight back brutally.
There has to be more triggers to provoke Kami. Someone hurting xey's friends? Bullies in general? Someone constantly touching xier's stuff?
It's alright if Kami gets aggressive for short periods of time (ex. hitting someone, throwing stuff, etc) and long periods of time (ex. a tantrum).
Along with wanting to know more about the world, xey also have a strong urge to protect others. He cannot feel physical pain, as he doesn't have any pain receptors. This is a good start! Kami is quite social, curious, and confident, good traits that will move the story forward. Xeir voice is also very unique, and personally my favorite bit!
However, how do xey appear to others? Do xey have more neutral and disinterested movements? Or does xey have more energetic and bouncy movements? Maybe xey has more creepy and unnatural movements, tending to stare at others a lot?
Kami also needs more traits. Currently, xey's personality needs some more fleshing out. It's not bad or boring, just needs some details to be in top shape. Here's some traits you can use: - Childish - Reckless - Observant - Patient - Paranoid over his loved ones - (Over)protective - Cocky - Show-off - Emotionally sensitive - Proud - Brave - Clingy - Whiny - Book smart - Envious - Hides feelings - Loyal - Honest
