Ahhhh, sorry I haven't been updating regularly like in the beginning. My mind is still blank 😑 I'm sorry everyone, thank you for staying here though. I love and appreciate all of you! Remember I really appreciate any and all comments!
But! To the actual topic at hand, Uhh my school is doing a scary story contest, and I'm thinking of joining you know? Soo I came up with a story it's sort of a draft right now, not yet finished. But I would like for u all to criticize it. Like tell me what I should fix or add or leave, yk. Sorry if this update isn't what u expected, I'm working up a Dazatsu story right now. Also, ignore the words inside the parenthesis, those are instructions for me. But here is my "spooky story":
It was beautiful. The golden strands of her hair threaded through my fingers. Catching the glow of the moonlight. I like the night; the air would always be cool and crisp. No loud sounds could be heard during the time the moon shine. Highlighting the golden hair in a way that could only be described as (blank, still haven't found a word, help?). I felt pride making its way into my chest. Nothing could ever replace this feeling of absolute euphoria of my job. Granted it was an odd one, but who would care if it's enjoyable? It gives me a hefty amount of money so that's a plus. Alas, I thrive in this feeling of utter pleasure; nothing else could come close.
Drinking in the image of the glowing strands of hair, I burn the memory into my mind. This was a successful mission overall, I would be rewarded greatly. Ecstasy was running through my veins, a perfect night under the silver moon, illuminating the locks of sunshine colored hair. It was a perfect night, save for the smell of the rotting corpse next to me.
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Uhh so yeah, that's my story. Still haven't found a title. Titles are hard 😰 but ye, I would really appreciate comments on this so I know what to fix. Thank you for reading! I love you guys!
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