Kat Reviews [CFCU]

King Eden | Wera

Author: RowanCarver

Title of Work: King Eden

Package: Silver Egg Package

Reviewed: Chapters 1-10

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4 out of 5

I think your cover is really unique. I appreciate that the title of your novel and your name are both legible as that's something that's often missing from Wattpad covers. The colors are very vibrant and mesh well together. Please note that my comments about the cover are prior to me reading your story.

At the moment, it gives a combination of science fiction and school textbook vibes. There is one element that I don't understand it's connection and that's the anchor. I don't know if this is an important symbol in your story, but I look forward to finding out!

(Please note: this section was written before you changed your cover.)

5 out of 5

This is an example of an excellent blurb. It introduces important elements without overwhelming the reader (i.e., the setting, the main character, the conflict). It also does a good job of avoiding mixed use of passive and active voice. If I were to judge whether I wanted to read the book on the blurb alone, I would definitely pick up something like this in a bookstore.