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Earthly Appetite | Wera

Author: Ouryoaie

Title of Work: Earthly Appetite

Package: Silver Egg Package (offered)

Reviewed: Chapters 1-3 (including prologue)

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4.5 out of 5

I actually find the current cover quite charming. I do wish there were a few more fantastical elements to it because at first glance, I thought it might have been realistic fiction. Though I like the glow of the text and the border, it really helps bring everything together. The subtitle on the bottom is hard to read, though I imagine it's not incredibly important.

5 out of 5

I think this is a good example of a good blurb. You've introduced the character, the stakes are clear, and creates enough of a mystery but not too much so that it's vague. I don't have anything to suggest, I think this captures a lot of relevant information and is a reasonable length. Great job!

5 out of 5

I quite liked the opening hook because it starts off dark. It keeps the reader wondering about what could have possibly happened. Because the point of the opening hook is to start an internal discussion for the reader, and I think you've succeeded with that with your prologue. Your word choice is very meticulous and contributes to the description of the scene in a way that's not overwhelming/underwhelming. It provides just enough detail for the reader to visualize what's happening.