I get annoyed when I'm reading and lyrics to songs just pop up randomly, or a character is listening to a band that they most likely would not listen to.
A confident girl with her life together like Annabeth is not going to listen to an emo band and be depressed.
A depressed boy like Nico is not going to listen to Friday by Rebecca Black and get up and dance around.
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Please don't make a whole chapter lyrics to a song from 2004 that most people haven't heard, because frankly, it's just frustrating. I love music- I really, really do... it's one of the only things that keeps me happy, along with my fandoms- but when you make a whole fanfiction full of song lyrics when it's just supposed to be a regular fanfiction, it's really annoying.
Imagine....
Annabeth got up out of her bed. She missed Percy soooooooooo much. A song popped into her head.
When I was a young boy, my father took me into the city to see a marching band. He said son when you grow up, will you be the savior of the broken, the beaten, and the damned?
Luckily, she would be going to Camp Half Blood later.
He said will you defeat them, your demons, and all the non-believers? The plans that they had made?
Because one day, I'll leave you, a phantom to lead you in the summer, to join the black parade.
And then the fic goes on to say how Nico woke up and danced to the Barney and Friends theme song.
It gets annoying.
If you got that MCR song up there then you are awesome! :)
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