Part Five

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1. Their eyes meet for the first time and everything around them freezes and time seems to stop.

I'VE GOT THE MAGIC IN ME!!

2. Their hands brushed against each other and he felt an electric shock shoot up his arm.

Guys watch out he's leaking electricity don't touch him whatever you do.

3. Their tongues battled for dominance.

And the next time they be dancing tango.

4. Frequently misspelled words.

Spot the wrong word:

They would defiantly meet again.

If you don't see anything wrong with this sentence I suggest you study English again.

pLEASE DON'T MIX IT UP OK IT'S D-E-F-I-N-I-T-E-L-Y NOT DEFIANTLY.

This is more of a personal pet peeve, so please excuse me.

5. Sasuke's skin is pale and smooth like porcelain.

He's not a China doll thank you very much.

6. It always smells of lavender. Like, always.

7. Naruto watched with awe as Sasuke's long, thick lashes fluttered open.

AIN'T NOBODY'S EYELASHES BE FLUTTERING OPEN WHEN THEY WAKE UP OK IF MY LASHES FLUTTER OMFG AM I A BUTTERFLY OR WHAT

8. Sasuke can afford a private plane and can book an entire restaurant when taking Naruto out on a date but can't get any bodyguards to make sure Naruto is safe when he gets a stalker.

LIKE YOUR BOYFRIEND'S LIFE IS ON THE LINE MAYBE STOP BEING SUCH A MONEY-SLUT AND SAFE HIM BEFORE I STAB MYSELF FROM FRUSTRATION!

Lol what is a money-slut

9. Naruto's honeycomb hair ruffled in the soft spring breeze as the sun shined a halo on his glowing hair.

People I'm not joking if my hair always seemed perfect like that I would be a hair model by now.

10. There are always sakura petals, like, everywhere at anytime.


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