Adopted (one direction)

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Hey every one I figured out a way to write lol it's on a iPod haha but icant actualy download the app so I'm on the Internet way so this is very differnt to me so sorry for miss spelled words okay here's the story

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Louis's P.O.V

Lilly has been going out everyday scents I got back,I don't know what's going on at all

Ring Ring Ring

my phone went off

Doodle bug,it said I smiled to myself and answered it

"hello"I said

"I have her want her back meet me in the forest jut off the park and bring money.lots of it"and he hung up what is going on some one took Lilly

"BOYS!!!"I yelled in less than minute everyone was down stairs

"what's up"niall asked

I was about to cry but I was trying my best to keep them in

"s-someone has Lilly"i said holding back my tears I'm the worst father ever

"mate what do you mean"Liam asked

"seone has kiddnapped Lilly and were going to get her back now first we née money and lots of it who ever he is he wants money and a lot he means buisness"I said all the boys just looked confused, shooked, sad ,mad, angry

we all pretty much ran to the car and hopped in

"ok I have 322$ in my walet"I said

"I have 234$"niall said

"I got 125$"zayn said

"um I have 673$"Harry said

"I got 356$"Liam said

"ok so um Liam how much is yay all together"I said

"a little over 1700$ I said (sorry guys I don't know 'pounds')

"ok I don't think that's gonna be enough"I said

"stop at a bank"I said to Liam who was driving

I let a tear slip fo my eye

"please don't cry boo bear"Harry said I smiled at him

"sorry I'm a bad dad I should have thought about this more befor I chose to adopted a kid who has a bad past and-"I cut myself off oh my god the girl at the orphanga she said her dad abused her and left her one day and never saw her agin and she said he was gonna find her and probly kill her oh god I hope this isn't him

"guys I think I know who this guy is that took Lilly"I said shaking

"w-who"niall asked

"her dad"

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hahaha so who's happy I updated and found a way to I am lol

Ok so I just what to say this

All you people who keep complaining about puncuation and blah blah blah I found some one who is gonna edit my story so haha and also brides I found this person I really wanted to just cuss some of ya out but ya know I don't do that so your lucky

Hahaha I'm in a mood so go ahead and post all the stuff about my puncuation and stuff

I DONT CARE!!!!!!!!

Do u understand ok ok so shut to the up about it and if ya don't like it stop reading this book cause I really don't care I have pleanty of other people who love my book so suck it

Dont take it personal just take it!!

Ok sorry I had to speak my mind ok now that that's off my chest hahaha

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