Username of Author: RaeF1994
Title of story: Samut Nalir's Miraculous Elixir of Life
The dialogue in the prologue flowed nice, as did the prologue in general, and the dialogue in the rest of the story. It really reflected the personality of the speakers. The characters themselves, even the minor ones like the queen's servant and scribe, have their own distinct personalities, and they're believeable.
The prologue doesn't seem to match the story; and the description doesn't seem to match the prologue....at first. It all wraps around to eachother, and does so very nicely.
One thing I, personally, loved about the story was the names...well and the genre. Fantasy like this story has always been my favorite, so that may have given it an edge by personal preference. I read all seven chapters that are there so far, and I shall be back for more. The whole thing is very well written, and I'm sure it would hold any fantasy enthusiast's attention, as well as those people who somewhat enjoy fantasy.
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