Fourty one

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To all those who commented on the last one, thank you so much. And I understand that most of you aren't comfortable with dropping inline comments and it's ok✨

I don't expect every one of you to put inline comments, just a single comment stating that you liked the chapter is sufficient for me.

I love reading inline comments so much but if I were to choose between 100 comments from the same person or 15 comments from 15 different readers, I'd choose the latter anyday.

There was never a decline in terms of votes so I knew that readers are still loving it irrespective of the number of comments but when the votes and comments suddenly started decreasing it made me nervous.

Thanks to each one of you who votes on my stories and those who take their time out to drop inline comments and for those silent readers who leave a comment or 2 to let me know that you are enjoying this one❤️









'Ziva can you please call back? Atleast come home to see your mother. She wants you to be her side and I'm sure you wish for the same. I swear I won't disturb you.' Vami heard Mahi bhai on phone.

As soon as he noticed her presence he immediately began walking away.

'I need to talk to you.' she stated.

'What's going on here?' asked Sammy who had just gone there.

'He is sending a voice mail to his daughter on the phone and looks like she doesn't talk to him.' Vami told Sammy and Mahi bhai stopped in his tracks.

'I don't want this to a topic of discussion. I'd appreciate it if you keep it to yourself.' he announced and began to walk away.

'How long do you plan to keep ignoring us?' Sammy's voice came out louder than she expected.

'I am not ignoring anyone.' he replied.

'How many times have you talked to me since we  met at the food court?' asked Vami.

Mahi bhai dodged the question and kept walking away from them.

'You are living in regret. I can see it.' Vami screamed partly because she wanted her voice to reach him and partly because she was frustrated seeing him avoid them and the situation.

'Can you really see it?' Vami looked sidewards to see Sammy staring at me in confusion.

'Can you please be serious for a while?' she asked.

'I am serious. So I'm not even supposed to ask a question? You won't clarify my doubts now?' sammy fake sulked.

'Can you two please stop behaving like your fathers?' he asked.

'Why? Does that remind you of your kiddos whom you didn't trust?' Sammy asked bitterly.

'Ofcourse Sammy. He hates them and that's why he barely looks at us.' Vami provoked him.

'Yeah right. What else can we expect from him? Chachu thinks that his Mahi bhai still loves him. He's just living in a delusion. And this man loves no one!' Sammy said.

'If that's what you think it is, fine go ahead. It makes no difference to me.' it felt as if he's been hit by a lorry, fell from the top most floor and as if he's been pierced by  thousand knifes, all at once but he knew he deserved it.

'Why are you silent?' asked Vami.

'He's just a heartless human being. It's waste to even talk to him. Let's just go.' stated Sammy and it was the breaking point for him.

'Because I know I deserve this punishment. I don't deserve any love and I know that. Because I regret it every single day and I grew more and more despondent.  Because I know that I'm not eligible to seek forgiveness and because I know Ro would never forgive me. Because I know you all hate me to the core. That's why.' He immediately regretting saying it while the girls were still processing it.

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