It's time for Chapter 1! The...uh...I believe this says prologue. Anyway happy reading!
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. I'm not aware of a random pool in any camp (I think this is ThunderClan) so I'm assuming this is the Moonpool. This must be important if so many non-medicine-cats are going to the Moonpool. In other words, it's probably about Starkit.
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." My expert prophecy-decipherer app says that there is a 99.9% chance that it foretells that Starkit (or whoever she grows up to be ) will somehow defeat Tigerpaw/Tigerclaw and Hollyleaf, who are apparently the bad guys.
"Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "She has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know." Aha! So this mysterious blue she-cat is Bluestar! So this 'pool' scene is up in Silverpelt, because, well, Bluestar's dead. Hmm, is this 'white tom' Whitestorm? As for the gold tom...You know what I need more comments here so you guys can comment on who Mr Gold Tom might be...
She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy.
There won't be a translation for this chapter here because most of the errors are punctuation-related (probably the author's effort to make a good impression), so there'll only be translations for the chapters after this. Trust me, it goes downhill after this.
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StarKit's Prophecy + Translation of Grammar and Spelling + Comments
FanfictionThis is a StarKit's Prophecy fanfiction! It includes the original (grammatically incorrect) words (I think) and a translation and some of my own comments on everything! Please read!