StarKit's Prophecy + Translation of Grammar and Spelling + Comments

Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln

I know I said that I wouldn't put the author's notes from the story here, but this one was so funny that I had to put it here. Here it is: thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 I'm laughing so hard...

Anyway it's story time!

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's Flamepaw and lakePaw and hr friend JazzPaw (a.n. jazzie-kin ur my bff!) was slepping on the moss. I hope JazzPaw didn't sleep through her 'bff' 's apprentice ceremony

"JazzPaw get up" she cried. JazzPaw opened her brllaint blu eyes and looked at hr. Tragedy! JazzPaw is dead! *Hands Starpaw some tissue*

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. Starpaw's the deputy now?! Who allowed her to organize her own patrols? First Clan leader, now deputy. She'll be the medicine cat next.

"Sure!" said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was Blackstar!1!11 Everybody who knows what's going to happen next, raise your hand.

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. Wow. How unrealistic.

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was Sandstrom. Your a good fihter!" Can't you even spell your mate's name properly?

StarPaw was happy. She was a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. If everyone who was a good fighter was included in an important prophecy, you'd see heroes and heroines more times than you eat fresh-kill. 

If you couldn't understand the chapter, don't worry! I provide translations and more realistic elements in every other chapter! (Great StarClan, I sound like a person doing an advertisement...)