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throwback to season 1 when Jake fell through Holt's ceiling I will be changing some parts to make it more dramatic.

after Jake fell through the ceiling and was talking to the squad "boobs go in a bra! ha up top!" he said raising his hand, after a moment Charles high five him "woo! my man!" Jake exclaimed "well, sounds like costume duty is going great" he smiled "so great!" Charles beamed "were having the best time, right Amy" he smiled "I wish I was dead," she said flatly "mm" Jake hummed while nodding "hows the unwinnable bet going?" she smirked "well on the one hand, I fell through the ceiling and onto a pencil. on the other hand, I badly bruised my brain" he smiled "you wanna make a bet with Holt you should have made a bet you could win, like who wears more denim jackets," Rosa said with her usual monotone voice "that was one time! you guys never forget anything" Jake groaned "frankly I'm a little surprised you don't think I can win this thing, you're always telling me how I'm the best" Jake remembered all the times they said he was great but soon realized it was only Charles "yeah maybe it's just Charles" he shrugged "listen, Jake, I love you like you're one of my daughters" terry sighed "really?" Jake asked surprised "but it's not about you or how smart you are. it's about captain holt. Man's a genius! he's had you at every turn." Terry sighed "well not this day's turn time," Jake said standing up. suddenly the room started to spin slightly. Terry gave him a confused expression "sorry, pretty sure I got a concussion back there" he shrugged "here I come" he smiled as he got light-headed, letting himself fall forward. Terry picked him up and put him down in his desk chair "ohhh! strong!" he giggled 

(this part is where I change it from the show)

the room was spinning and he felt like he was floating but also falling "woah..." he said trying to focus on an object "Jake" Terry said grabbing his attention "yeah?" Jake smiled spinning in his chair "are you okay man?" Terry asked, concerned for his young detective "I am so g-" Jake cut himself off by throwing up into his trashcan aggressively "ooooh" Terry winced "does anyone have coffee?" Jake groaned "shouldn't you drink water?" Amy said smugly "ew no" Jake scoffed "here," Terry said handing Jake his water "Terry noooo" Jake wined "I'll get you some coffee Jakey!" Charles smiled before walking off to get his coffee.

Amy didn't admit it but she was a little worried. Jake was her... friend. he was reckless and he keeps getting hurt. 

It's weird for Jake, he feels 'off'. "Jake, what are your symptoms?" Amy asked "uh... I'm dizzy, double vision, feels like there is pressure on my head, nausea and I'm sensitive to lights and noise" he shrugged "okay. take it easy. vomiting is gross" she gagged at the word 'vomit' "thanks Amy" he smiled

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