My Commentary II

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This book is mostly autobiographical. It has parts going back as far as when I was 14 up to now in my mid-twenties. I'll post a commentary after every fifth "chapter". It might be fun to see what people say about it.

My First Time parts I & II was adapted from a diary I kept when I was 21-22. I had to make many changes to it so it'd be a more coherent story. I didn't add too much of the burning feeling to keep it sexy (lol). There was a lot of burning at first. Thinking back, I almost cried the first thirty seconds or so.

My Mind was a poem I wrote a few years ago. Not much to say about it other than it was in response to stupid social media posts I mistakenly read. Too many stupid people in this world. Oh well.

My Porn was written recently after a few friends asked me about my porn likes and dislikes. I even wrote an article about it. I know, I know, it's a weird poem.

Sex Crazed? was written when I was 24. It might be more personal than it should be as it gets into my medical history. Also, maybe I need to start toning down the anal references. It's not like everyone is into that like me. I don't know, we'll see.

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