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Hello my loves!!

So it's been almost a week since my last update on this book and I know it takes time to gain readers but this book is moving slower than I anticipated. Of course I will still be updating because I'm greatful for who is here right now.

Before I update chapter sixteen I would like to hear some feedbacks. So if any one would like to answer a few questions for me I'd appreciate it.

1. Is it moving too slow or too fast?

2. Is there any character so far that you guys would like to see more of?

3. How's the book so far...honestly?

4. What traits should I portray more in Thain?

5. Do anyone think Ariana is being too naïve or soft per se?

6. Do we want longer or shorter chapters, or are they fine as is?

7. Is there a specific chapter so far that something happened in that you would like me to elaborate more on?

8. What's the most unsatisfactory chapter so far?

9. For anyone who came from any of my other stories...I wanna hear you guys thought on this one! How's it so far compared to the others?

10. I'd like suggestions for future chapters because sometimes to do get writers block so if anyone would be kind enough to leave me a few thoughts I'd love that.






Okay!! That's it I'm looking forward to hearing from you guys soon!

Love, Bubbles❤

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