1. Wrong Planet by soobslatte
Title: 7/10
Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 3/10
Plot: 9/15
Creativity: 11/15
Grammar: 9/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 9/15
Total: 57/100
Review: I was quite intrigued by the plotline as usually when we come across K-pop stories we either stumble upon mafia stories or a rom-com one but this is straight out of another universe! Something that caught me off-guard would be the key elements when writing a book that is the intricate details such as the cover and the blurb. The title isn't visible on the cover, and I see a small logline on the cover, which is again not very visible. A change to that and a little check on the grammar points would make MOA's happy!
2. Total Eclipse of the Heart by strawberry1d
Title: 7/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 6/10
Plot: 11/15
Creativity: 11/15
Grammar: 13/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 3/5
Overall: 12/15
Total: 73/100
Review: Starting off, I love how you have maintained Suga's character more or less like his real-world character which makes readers interact with the story better. Kick starting off with the intricate details, I love the vibe of the cover, but I would suggest having a change in the font, as it took me three tries to make out the 'Total' in the cover. The blurb was jotted to the point, however, I would suggest an ever longer blurb that contains all the crucial details that take place in the story without giving out too much. The grammar was on point but there were some errors here and there which could be rectified with grammar checkers. Overall, the Armies are in for a treat!
3. Hunters by Yeontanaaaaaaa
Title: 8/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 14/15
Creativity: 14/15
Grammar: 13/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 14/15
Total: 85/100
Review: Where do I start? It would obviously be one of my favorite K-pop stories I have ever read on this platform! It was more like watching a movie, that literally kept me on the edge of my seat. I definitely saw a mini Ghostbusters movie unfolding within each and every page, and it did keep me hooked. Everything is perfect except for a small flaw in a very important detail, that is the cover. Cover's should look more attractive, and more daring to plunge readers, but this one is quite vague and bland. But apart from that, this is one story that would definitely be my must-read during my free hours. Engenes and Fearnots are in for a ride!
4. Tales of Heart by aurora_2604
Title: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 11/15
Creativity: 11/15
Grammar: 12/15
Characters: 4/5
Interaction with the readers: 4/5
Overall: 12/15
Total: 74/100
Review: Since it's one shot, I cannot say anything specific, but I do love the writing style and reader interaction. Armies would give this a hundred!
5. No Secrets Among Us by _PurpleWorld_07_
Title: 8/10
Cover: 5/10
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 6/15
Creativity: 6/15
Grammar: 6/15
Characters: 2/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 7/15
Total: 46/100
Review: The title is amazing and I felt like the blurb could have been expanded further. There were minor issues in the spacing of dialogues and paragraphs and at some points the paragraphs were a bit hyped up like I do understand that she's an engene and obviously she's hyped up to meet the boys but at times it went off-guard. Apart from that, I'm sure that this would be a perfect treat for all the engenes out there!
6. Secrets by andreachim98
Title: 8/10
Cover: 6/10
Blurb: 6/10
Plot: 9/15
Creativity: 10/15
Grammar: 9/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 3/5
Overall: 9/15
Total: 63/100
Review: I actually love the setting of the plot! I haven't quite stumbled upon a bts fanfiction where the plot is actually set in the 90's and thus this was something new. With better pacing and grammar check, this book is definitely going to be a favorite among armies!
7. The Void in my Heart by bitter_hearts_
Title: 7/10
Cover: 4/10
Blurb: 4/10
Plot: 10/15
Creativity: 10/15
Grammar: 6/15
Characters: 3/5
Interaction with the readers: 2/5
Overall: 9/15
Total: 55/100
Review: I really love the plot as how Beomgyu is portrayed as the lively character as he is while Chiyoko has a polar opposite side of being harsh that actually pushes the story. However, there was a slight error in pacing and paragraph distribution but apart from that MOA's are obviously getting a splendid read for the year!
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