Story Scratch Notes + Reflection

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***Don't Treat As Canon***
Name:  Zhao Sheng
- Currently lives by himself
- Is raised to be "perfect"
- Lacks familial love
- Only child - Likes pain in others (?)
- Likes control
- Was gonna be poor

Like a daoist cultivator untouched by material possessions. In school, famed as the #1 in our grade with an IQ of a genius, he always have a stoic look and behavior. He looked uninterested at anything, and I rarely see him talk to another person during class as if these humans would taint him.

ML (Tough Guy): Liu Jian
- Parents dead
- Old grandpa is all that left and sister
- Likes sleep /Cut off spending
- He works
- Lives Ancient chinese house
-He doesn't care about a lot of things
- He wants independence from his grandpa

ML (Mr. Perfect): Zhou Mu
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- Spend time My house
- Kiss drunk. With the two of them
- Grab and Suck
- Then awkward
- The avoiding game

Plot Wish list:
Watching netflix then show (movie) during recess
Sitting on his lap
Soft kisses on the corner of eyes
Grab tits
Do a therapy circle
Trio eat together nom

Club: Zhao Sheng -gardening
Liu Jian - No clubs, he works
Zhou Mu- Student Council
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Reflection:
I remember starting this book with a heavy sense of loneliness and despair lmao. I was a memer, cackling at deez nuts jokes, while my friends are all moving on with their lives, fufilling the expectations society placed upon them. Good for them! Big thumbs up Anyways, I wanted to just create a character with the same problem as yours truly.

Character Reflection:
Zhao Sheng is such a weird character. His father died, and his busy mom raised him. He doesn't like asking for anything, yet he expects everyone to give him everything. He was raised in a strict environment with high expectations on his academic performance. He was always alone and every friend he made along the way, were to just benefit him. He knows he's messed up in the head. He rather keep things to himself when things get serious. He doesn't like it when people try to leave him. He wants friends but at the same time, he knew he can't keep them. He beats around the bush a lot!

Liu Jian is the most stable in the 3. I originally wanted him to be just a cliche, soft on inside and tough on outside character. Anyways, both parents are dead, live with grandpa. Loves his sister. Grandpa owns the casino. Very rich but wants to become independent one day. I wonder why this hunk fell in love with Zhao Sheng lol. Anyways, he likes taking care of those weaker than him that's why.

Zhou Mu is the most insane. His mother died(?) While Zhao Sheng suffered neglect, he suffered mental scaring. Everything was his fault growing up because of his brother. He hates everyone. He doesn't like it when people cry. Doesn't care about you or anyone in the slightest. Everything he does is to achieve his goal. Won't reveal anything about himself too much. Is heartless but likes Zhao Sheng's and later- Liu Jian's company.

Explaining the dynamic:
Zhao Sheng is the glue between Zhou Mu and Liu Jian. The two tops see each other as companions and adores Zhao Sheng.

Liu Jian is the glue between Zhao Sheng and Zhou Mu. Zhao Sheng and Zhou Mu love each other, but they know they're too selfish to actually commit to each other so they brought in Liu Jian.

Zhou Mu is the glue between Zhao Sheng and Liu Jian. They love each other, but Zhao Sheng's personality might cause problems if Zhou Mu isn't around, and Zhou Mu's presence makes Liu Jian unconsciously protective of Zhao Sheng.

Everyone loves each other in their own way I guess?

Thanks again everyone!

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