A Pool of Concern (For Those More Judgemental)

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Please, let me be

Free to do whatever I please

These parties aren't wearing me down

It's your constant criticisms making me frown


You have no right to intrude in my life

"We're just concerned" and yet I've learnt

Your life's not exciting, so you're living through mine


So, I like a small drink but that makes you think

I'm an alchy?

I drink, I don't smoke, I certainly don't toke

What a joke to assume I'm below you in life

When you cheat on your wife,

Get high on your lies,

It's you that's despised


I've got 70 years to fulfil all my plans

But instead of help with my dreams

It just seems you're like weeds

Trying to succeed in bringing me down.

I won't drown


A Pool Of Concern (For Those More Judgemental) – Photo taken by me on the patio of Las Brisas, in Laguna Beach. Used with permission 

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