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Akshita's eyes flutter, she opens her eyes and the bright light falls on her eyes. She groans as the pain shot in her head cause of the light. Her pupils dilate and she tries to adjust to the lights. Her eyes flicker across the room to find everyone staring at her with sympathy.
Her mother moves to her, stroking her cheek, she press a kiss on her bandaged forehead.
"How are you feeling ?" Advik asks sitting in front of her and concern etched on his face.
"Huh" Akshita's brow squint in confusion and she observes her hand attached to an iv. Realisation dawns upon her, snippets of memories crowd upon her and her pulse quickens in a second..
"I fell from stairs" she mutters trying to remember.
Her palm reaches to her stomach "My baby. Is my baby fine ?" she asks frightening and sit on the bed.
"Akshita relax" Advik smoothes her back.
"You are scaring me. My baby is safe ?" She questions her voice edged with pain.
"Drink water first" Advik brings the glass of water close to her.
"Bhaiya tell me na" She requests but he insists her to drink water. She drink a few sips.
"Answer me please" Her voice cracks and fear flash across her face.
Advik's heart twists in pain to see his sister. He keeps his tears at bay and cradles her face "Akshita you had a miscarriage" as soon as the word escapes his lips and all colour from Akshita's face drained.
"What ?" She ask with tears brimming her eyes.
Words struck her harder than it should. She clasps her mother's hand in her fist. Panic explodes her stomach and heart thrash in her ribcage. Shiver rolls down her spin. Intense grips her chest and she struggles to breathe.
"Akshita" Advik starts to speak but his throat clogs and he stroks her cheeks silently.
Akshita's eyes flickers around the room when it land on the person behind this tragedy. Person behind her miseries. Her Husband. His eyes collide with her for a split second before he averts his eyes. A tear cascades down his cheek.
"Why are you crying ? You should be happy right" Everyone's head snaps at Akshita who was glaring at Aditya with utmost hatred.
"I am sorry Akshita" Aditya cries before bowing down his head. Everyone frowns while Niharika's eye widen in shock realising where it was leading to.
"Ishu bring whiskey for your bhaiya. It's time for his celebration" Mock colouring Akshita's tone leaving everyone shocked.
"You must be happy right. God fulfilled your wish" A sob left Aditya's lip at her words.
"Ou-my baby is no more" Aditya's heart pricks when she correct her words. Her eyes blazing in anger and voice lurking with anger and hatred.
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Tangled Love
General FictionTANGLED SERIES (BOOK 1) Aditya what are you saying ?" I ask with glossy eyes. Not believing my ears what he said. No this can't happen he can't say this. "I am saying right and I don't give a damn if it hurts you" he voice dripping anger. "Please...
