A.N: Before I start the chapter I want to thank all of you for all the support I've received in this story. You guys are seriously awesome. I mean Ch. 28 went up after 31 days and I've already got more than 650 favs and followers and almost two thousand reviews, so thanks for all the support, its rather gratifying to know so many people like the story.
I got a review from a guest that caught my eye so I decided to address it because it made a good point.
Mr. Criticism 2/27/13 . chapter 17
Artemis and Percy are too OOC... you are not portraying them correctly.
Just so you know I agree with you completely..... But this is fan fiction. If my characters were based on the Rick Riordan books then none of this would happen, ever. No PercyxArtemis story can not be OOC. The only story I've read that truly portrays both characters somewhat accurately based on the original books is Everlasting Promises by Starblade176. I am not as good as he is. I wish I was but I'm not. I could probably portray them more accurately if I wanted to take my time and truly work hard on my story but I just started writing fan fics two months ago. Right now I'm just having some fun writing and writing often. I apologize if the way I portray them bothers you, wait no actually I'm not sorry, and I would like to read your much more accurate representation of the characters.... Unless you're Starblade176 reviewing as a guest, I know you haven't written a Pertemis story that accuratley portrays them, because there are none. Now I'm not angry but I'm 28 chapters into my story, I can't change the characters now. Thanks for pointing out the obvious but I am well aware that Artemis and Percy are OOC. Any story where the goddess of maidens falls for a demigod isn't "in character".
Sorry for the rant but once I start writing it's hard to stop myself. Thanks for all your support everyone. This chapter isn't all that interesting but I can't just jump to the exciting parts. This is mostly just to finish up the reunions and I tried to do it quickly but like I said, when I start writing, I have difficulty stopping. I promise the war will start soon and the action will pick up quickly.
Ch. 29
"You have all done well. This is but the beginning. Do not get ahead of yourselves as we have a long way to go. But I think I speak for Jason as well when I say we are proud of you today. You have proven why you are the elite in the Army of the Light, the best of the best. Return to the White City; Jason and I will return tomorrow after speaking with the Olympians." Percy announced loudly to the troops as Jason nodded in agreement.
"THANK YOU SIRS!" The troops thundered before they all disappeared into a blinding light, leaving on Percy, Jason, Clarisse, and Luke.
Percy turned around only to have his helmet ripped off as Artemis crashed her lips onto his in a passionate kiss. When they broke apart he smiled stupidly and saw an identical expression on Jason as Piper stepped back.
"It's not possible." Came the shocked voiced of an old centaur standing in front of a hundred dumbfounded demigods and hunters.
Percy smiled as he saw Chiron staring at him in shock.
"Hello Chiron. It's nice to be back at camp, although I wish the circumstances for our return were more pleasant." Percy said before he was pulled into a tight embrace from his old mentor.
When Chiron stepped back he looked disbelievingly at his favorite student before him, "How are you here Percy?"
Percy's smile grew, "Why don't we gather everyone in the amphitheater in thirty minutes and Jason and I will explain how and why we are here."
Chiron's face shifted into a smile, "Yes, I think some explanations would be nice my boy."
"Before you do that, I need to introduce one of my generals right now as she will likely kill me if I make her wait another minute." Percy said as Clarisse snorted in amusement from behind her helmet.
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