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Please comment on the story I would like to know where I can improve My writing skills at the most part and how I might change the character form to be more likable than anything of even not likable and how do can I create more stories of any type. 

so be kind as I have this story on a paper file here at home and it is copyrighted here and do not copy my works thank you.

please vote this helps as well .

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