Book - The End: The final planet
Writer - mrMagus
Reviewer - Rising-Queen
Cover - 1/5
Title - 2/5
Grammar and punctuation - 1/5
Summary - 1/5
Reader engagement - 3/5
Character building - 3/5
Writing style - 2/5
Plot originality - 2/5
Total - 15/25
Review - I would like to first comment on the cover, I see the font isn't in the middle and the background isn't looking good too.
I would suggest using a editing apps like canva or you can even order from cover shops here.
(TheHappyWriters) itself has many amazing cover designers.
Blurb is too short and not descriptive since your writing style is in the form of conversations I would say to pay utmost attention to the fonts and italics to separate out actions and speeches.
Speeches can be modified and made more progressive and scientific.
Many nouns aren't capitalized which can be fixed by instant editing.
You have revealed a lot in the blurb itself then you should, I would advise you to maintain some secrecy, add a quote (or a dialogue) from one of your characters that is eye catchy in the front and then try to describe the situation, and leave the on-lookers hanging, they'll eventually click read.
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