no need to read to understand this story but helloooo its the author, this is my first book so hopefully it gets better as time passes. Also I wont write as much but try as often! critisicm of any form is so helpful to me. enjoyyyy
Also a quick luh disclaimer! I Really don't want this story to be like...More than 40 pages. sorry if that angers you its js like that's too much for my short attention span and there's only so far you can drag a story in my opinion. too much before it just becomes brain slop for me, but I would def consider a sequel if it comes out to my liking. Also in this book I try to refrain from smut and do just lil cut-to-next-morning thing. Womp womp cant please everyone.
Also English is not per say my first language I am hispanic and the main character is Latina. Which means I sprinkle in Spanish- 🫠 (but I will have a luh translation next to it)
also count: 4
Here's a description of some of the main characters btw! (cheap excuse for my short-term memory)
Elena- (23 bday July) 5'2 Latina with curly hair and a 4 year old named Diana- works as a birthsound technician and lives with David
David- (24 bday Feb) 5'11 middle eastern with curly hair and a father- Current NBA player for the Memphis grizzlies
Maya- (25 bday jan) 6'3 Swede with blonde hair- works as a tattoo artist and lives with Gianna
Gianna- (25 bday sep) 5'7 Swede/Italian brunette- unemployed and lives with Maya
Elise- (24 bday Jan) 5'9 South Korean raven- Works at front desk of medical center and lives alone.
Delilah- (24 bday Apr) 5'4 Latina/white, one of Elena's best friends. Later mentioned
