Tensura What If: Silver Timeline (Draft)

Note: Q & A

I really need involvement and comments for this, this is about the story itself and for your better reading and storytelling experience.

So ever since I've been making this story, I have been winging it for every other chapter with new ideas mixed in with old ones. So, when I was bored during class hours and I had my laptop open for "studying," I managed to create a very rough/vague outline/framework for... Chapter 91 to 124!

As I was making the outline, I found a lot of changes and some questions popping up. So I plan on posting some of the changes, and if you have anything you either want to add on, disagree on, or overall just want to voice your opinion, you are welcome.

It still depends on me whether to take your suggestion or listen to your opinions.

Then there are the questions, which really need feedback since I can't move forward with the plot without it. Though it is still a bit far away, so I can take my time with it.

KEEP IN MIND THESE ARE SPOILERS FOR THE NEXT 91-124 CHAPTERS AND YOU ARE READING KNOWING THIS FACT.

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Statements

Kagali's Role:

Kagali would not become Kazaream; she'll be like a student/apprentice of Rimuru in magic. While also acting on some occasions as either Milim's babysitter or like a stressed older sister/relative figure (Milim only thinks of her as a friend though).

Character Revisions:

Since Kagali was never Kazaream and is not 'evil' here, Clayman is not as well; speaking of which, they also don't wear masks since Kagali is not deformed.

Demon Lords:

There will be some random demon lords here and there from time to time that will be mentioned once and never again, probably because they died.

Rudra's Grudge:

Rudra will hold a grudge against Rimuru but will not do anything. He is not stupid enough to pick a fight while he has Velgrynd, and Rudra still has his game with Guy. He does plan on picking a fight after he won the game from Guy.

Rimuru's Status:

Rimuru will not become a (official) demon lord. Guy would not approve of it as it would be unfair for Rudra to have Rimuru be part of Guy's side. Though the majority of the demon lords have labeled him as an unofficial demon lord, his identity is not known by humanity and monster kind as an unofficial demon lord.

Interactions with Leon:

Sylvia and Rimuru occasionally visit Leon to mess with him. Rimuru chastises his apathetic expression and not doing anything to deny misunderstanding about him. Leon, in turn, will be more vocal with his feelings, meaning Pirino and Pizu are alive, Shizu is not traumatized, and Ifrit is cooperative with Shizu. She will still join Chloe, and Leon would still leave her.

Focus on Tempest:

Rimuru as a demon does not care much for his satisfaction and pleasire when building his city, meaning Tempest would be more practical than Rimuru focusing on hot springs and other stuff like seafood.

Potential Non-Joins:

People like Vesta, Kaijin, and the dwarf brothers potentially may not join Tempest. Because Rimuru would not randomly come to Dwargo one day but an official visit, and Gazel would never give away his best blacksmith and scientist if he can.

Orc Lord Arc:

The orc lord arc will not happen. Rimuru would help the Kingdom of Orbic before the famine happens, and only a portion of the orcs will migrate to Tempest in the name of repaying the debt, and yes, Geld will be part of it.

Clayman Arc:

The entire Clayman arc will not happen since he is not evil but more of an advisor to Kagali. Gelmud, Yamza, Mjurran, among others will not be part of Amarita. Well, maybe Mjurran. Also Kumara and her mother will join tempest.

Yuki's Summoning:

Yuki does not have the clowns; I mean, Kazaream was the one who summoned him in the first place. Plot will handle his summoning; don't worry, he is part of the timeline after all.

Questions

Should Rimuru still name his nation as Tempest? He only got that after his and Veldora's 'family name' in this timeline; he is technically real family already, and it would be weird to go with Tempest when he has Velgrynd.

Should the direwolves evolve in a different way? Like they are called Tempest wolves because Rimuru gave them the family name which is connected to Veldora. If yes, what race should they evolve into and what abilities should they gain from it based on Rimuru's abilities?

Two primordials will return to the cardinal world after getting heavily injured and their souls weakened. This is also a punishment after they were fighting, let down their guard, and/or showing off. You guys pick which two primordials that will remain in the Cardinal world.

Do you guys want a parallel of Ciel to be in the Cardinal world too?

Also for the random demon lords, I have a dark elf, a demonoid, tiger lycanthrope, Oni, and a lich. They don't have any names nor appearances yet so you can give them any names you want either male or female. You can even suggest their appearances and attitude, take note they are one-time demon lords though.

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If you guys want to message me personally, I recently made a Discord account. Though I don't plan on making a server since I don't really have the time, you guys can directly message me for your opinions and suggestions. Please take note our time zone may not be the same so don't expect a quick reply.

Account: scribe0

Since you bothered reading till the end, here are some fun facts about the story that was scrapped.

1. Toru aka Satoru the fragment hunter who was suppose to be the new protagonist would have Hinata as his love interest. There is a whole backstory of how Hinata's early reincarnations were past lovers of Toru going by the name Ela. Which would be a former child of Ouroboros and was killed. And the personalities in his head are commenting every action he makes with her, some are teasing him, some are supportive, some want him to mess up.

2. I made a list of potential arcana and most of them did not appear. Some of which would be on the enemy side that Ouroboros recruited like Cid from eminence in shadow, Nazarick and Ainz from Overlord, the night furies from httyd, and the lunarians from one piece which made a quick appearance before dying. In the arcana's side are Simo Hayha, Alexander, Zenobia, and other real life figures. 

3. I never planned any of the multiverse plotline, that is why it is so random and feels out of place. Adding the greek pantheon arc which was only because I was watching too much greek myths during those times.

4. The original idea that I had for a fanfic was Rimuru dying early not by stabbing but because it was raining heavy during his highschool and got in an accident. He would then be reborn as an ogre, and it would have been a more serious and drama themed with betrayals and gore. He would also have to eat like the orc lord with his mouth, since that is the only way to consume with predator.

5. There was suppose to be a chapter showing Lait vs fenn which the entire fight was basically a brawl.

6. I don't know what I am doing and how I am still able to write this story.

7. I thought this fic would end in less than a hundred chapters, but here we are...