Back to the Otherside

Chapter 11: Pitstop at Gluttony

AUTHOR'S NOTE:

SO PAY ATTENTION!

It is been brough to my attention despite having people liking this story. They have become EB's aka Entitled Brats online making demands.

Look I truly appreciate your interest in the characters and plot. However, I want to remind you that this story is structured as a mystery. Part of the journey is about building tension and developing the characters before they encounter the main villains.

I understand that many of you are eager to see the characters meet certain canon characters and get to the action, I Like fight scenes as much as the next person since I'm a DBZ fan but the story is cartoon crossover mytery with my oc's who are part of a magical girl genre (Winx club and WITCH) and three canon characters are simple monsters that are young thrown into an adventure mystery solving case in Hazbin Hotel and Helluva Boss world.

This isn't Karate kid or Dragonball Z where they'll easily beat the bad guys with fists. Please remember that not every story follows a straightforward path. Just like in other narratives—such as in 'Thicker Than Water' by Aragem—the buildup is crucial for character development and plot depth.

If I want them to meet characters, I have to write probable and plausible ways that way they will all be in character. This isn't MLP fim or Barbie movies where everyone is friends.

Think logically, the hero doesn't meet the main villian face to face in the start. There's a reason it will take a while for my winx club oc's and canon characters from AAh Real Monsters! to meet the Vees or Striker and with good reason. Striker's a bounty hunter while the Vees could benefit with dark motives involving mortals.

I promise that the story will unfold at its own pace, and I encourage you to enjoy the mystery as it evolves. While I appreciate your excitement, I ask that you refrain from making demands for updates or spoilers. Your patience means a lot, and I'm committed to delivering a satisfying story that respects both my creative process and your expectations.

I made myself clear I won't follow the canon events 100% percent.

BTW I will be making another poll on my deviantart for consultation SO be alert.

NOW to answer reviews,

Whiney: I apologize if my story didn't meet your expectations, but I've been clear about the content and tone from the beginning. I'm not obligated to include specific scenes or plot points just to satisfy individual readers' desires. I appreciate your feedback, but I'd appreciate it if you could respect my creative decisions. Why? I tell you why, Because of too many rude reviwers rushing inspiration. Instead of respecting.

Douche nag: It's overunderstood they will, if you've been paying attention our heroes will be asking them questions. I'm not going to reveal answer questions that might give away the plot. I'd appreciate it if you could wait patiently for the next update and let the story unfold naturally.

Guest: I understand that you're excited about the story and want to see certain plot points unfold. However, I'd appreciate it if you could express your enthusiasm in a more respectful and considerate way. Using language that dismisses and belittles others' opinions and concerns is not constructive or welcome in this community.

I'd be happy to continue sharing my story with you, but I expect all readers to engage in a respectful and civil manner.

My story's progression isn't tied to Hazbin Hotel's Season 2 release. I'm writing at my own pace to ensure quality and consistency.