Ok guys I'm sorry if this story isn't to your liking this is the first book I've made and is you have any advise on how i can improve my stories i would be grateful and i hope you like my book thanks for reading
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Hello my names Nagisa Yagami. I'm 18 years old and I live with my mother, and my younger brother. It sounds like I have a normal life right? I wish, well anyway let me tell you how it all began as we started our journey.
Nagisa's P.O.V
Well school's finally over and now I'm left alone with my little brother, although he doesn't really talk to me much.
Mum had gone on a trip over sea's for work, she's a doctors.
Now that school's finished it's summer; most people would be going to the beach and stuff right, I guess I'm a little bit different from everyone else.
I'm lying here alone in my room with my music.
RING RING RING
Suddenly out of no where my phone starts ringing.
I quickly turn the music down and answer it.
"H-hello?" i say as i lay back on my bed.
"Whats up it's Ally" said the familiar voice.
"Nothing really just listening to music, what about you"?.
The small talk continued for a few minutes.
"Wait, wait, wait this is getting off topic" Ally said in frustration.
"What are you talking about" I said in confusion.
"Pack your bags were going on a road trip" she beamed with excitement.
"WH-WHAT" I shouted in response.
But where, with who, what for, how are we going to get there, these questions continued to move around in my head over and over.
Wait what do you do on road trips anyway?.
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So what did you guys think i know its not that good but anyway please let me know what you think
What would you do on a road trip? Who would you go with and where would you go?
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Thank you for reading ill update the next chapter in a few days so stay tuned.
-Sakura

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The road trip
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