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Announcement

Rereading my story made me realize that I missed some parts in the plot that I had initially made and wanted to fix that. So, to do that I will be rewriting some chapters. In other words, I will be deleting a few chapters and rewrite them because I came to notice how "lacking" they are to me. Although the chapters will be rewritten, the plot will still follow. It's just that some dialogue will be changed.

Especially since the last few chapters made me realize how much of a writer's block I had. Reviewing my notes made me realize that jumping from one "dramatic" scene to another was not something I knew how to write. And so, as I had said before and probably have been saying, I will be rewriting. Therefore, please do not be alarmed if some chapters are suddenly gone, poof, non-existent.

On another note, this is just a thought and I might need some of your suggestions on this matter.

Should I focus heavily on just the pairing on Shu and  Lucas throughout the story, this is in between plots, or should I mellow down on it and focus more on the story plots. Given how each "episode" seems to focus on them and then slightly on the plot and everything.

I need a heavy opinion from everyone so that I can improve my writing in this story. Every time I read my own story and notice the mistakes, I keep thinking to just abandon the story. In which I have done with my few other stories but that was mainly because I had already forgotten how the story of Twilight went and just forgot.

I didn't want to give up on this story because unlike the others that I made, which were honestly made on a whim, this one was planned. With notes about the characters, some additional plots, character background, their back stories, the phantom scars of the characters, the character developments and when it should start showing and everything.

Because of how excited I was, I had failed to notice how fast-paced this story seemed. Especially on the development between Shu and Lucas, I had especially noticed how I made Laito very OOC in that one chapter. I had actually even made my own character, out of character from how I first wrote him to be.

So that's that. I need your help, your opinion, any suggestions will do. A feedback. Your feedback is deeply appreciated. I hope dear readers can help me through this and am truly, very sorry for my technical hiatus.

Thank you.