Mikasa x Eren it's time

I want your opinions

For those that don't care, then take this as an A/N for both stories and continue what you were doing before this annoying notification popped up to annoy you.

Again I am working slow to provide the best for all you that like this story, I am proud that this story I thought would not gain any attention, just be out there and no one would read, would become so popular, among the top 10 of Mikasa x Eren.

I cant believe this silly story I made up actually became known. But I want to move to the real topic...

How bad is my story? I am the type of person that wants to please others....And i don't want to...I have to.

What are your negatives/problems with the story....If I can call it a story since its just a fanfic from a guy who is obsessed with this series that I will get a tattoo once I am of age.

How can I improve? I beg you to let me know, this story is the only thing going on in my life that I truly am proud of creating. I bought an instrument just to get closer to my friends that I can never hangout with besides school. I have removed objects that mean something to me, how I got friends, a little console that showed me what waits to be discovered.

I want to know how I can be better...I am a social outcast but I still want to please.

To be descriptive on who I am, I am a negative person who will never say the truth in front of your face unless needed (which will be never). The stereotype is true, I listen to metal. I like to wear dark clothes with blue jeans, leave my hair be. I am the definition of average, B+ A-/A student that can lead others if he wanted to but chooses to follow and share ideas no one could think of. Not emo but serious for every topic, shy, not very social but I force myself to be kind. I will not bring my pain in the ass evil side to people, I will always be humble and show respect and put others before me, help those that ask.

I want to be good to you all, otherwise I am spouting words from my journal I call "Madness", where I get my ideas from. By seeing the bad in this world, even experiencing it, and not pushing it away....but forcing it away with bits of rage.

And again..otherwise this is An authors note of me complaining, read if you wish, I will not force you as you control your self, your body, your mind.

See you again