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Most fan-fictions I read doesn't have a good plot.

That or the author is just stalling for the whole book.

That or it doesn't have the magic it needs (no I am not talking about hardcore sex in the second chapter)!

Like sometimes when I read Young Justice fan-fictions there's no crime! IT'S LIKE CANADA (there's some but not MAJOR crime)!!!

And speaking of Young Justice, if your OC is not a super hero or anything like that, THEN SHE/HE CANNOT ENTER THE JUSTICE LEAGUE! 

Take it from Captain Marvel, he couldn't enter (The Young Justice or whatever) as a kid, he had to enter as Captain Marvel.

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Creepypasta

THERE'S NO KILLING? 

Really?! It's a fandom where people worships CRAZY PSYCHOPATHIC KILLERS!!!

How can there not be killing? I mean look at Jeff the KILLER, killer is in his killer name!

But what really catches me off is when one of the Creepypasta's kill at OC's whole family and the OC is perfectly fine with that and dates the Creepypasta.

BISH NO! IF SOMEONE KILLED MY WHOLE FAMILY INCLUDING MY DOG I WILL GRAB MY PHONE, RUN DOWN THE STREET SCREAMING LIKE A MANIAC SAYING "HELP ME HELP ME", GET TO MY FRIENDS HOUSE THAT DOWN THE STREET, AND CALL 9-FUCKING-1-1!

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South Park

There's no swearing?

It's South Park, that show contains a lot of swearing, racism, killing, and bad voice imitations of actors/actresses.

Kenny not dying?! Well Death must really like him now.

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Anime: Fullmetal Alchemist

Edward Elric stops looking for Alphonse body (or they already found it and Edward stops traveling) or they don't use alchemy at all.

DUDES! COME ON!

That is not cool.

You can still write a fan-fiction with lovey dovey stuff and still  have those stuff included!!!

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Anime: Attack on Titan

RHBGRHKGB;RUBHV;WGE;B!

(I stopped reading those fan-fictions because there were really bad ones out there or the author put too many chapter, unless it's a one-shot.)

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The Walking Dead

There are many good ones I've read and bad-ish one I've read.

Seriously guys, when the walker bites some... KILL HIM/HER!

They are infected (even though the guy at the CDC said we're all infected)!

Also (since I read Carl Grimes x OC/reader) please, please, please let Carl and the OC/reader get to know each other first.

I don't believe in "love at first sight". 

Before love there's like and before like there's strangers that becomes friends.

If your fan-fiction is like mine (The Sheriff's Daughter), where Carl and the OC are related (I support incest, gays, lesbians, bisexuals, transgenders, etc.) then that's fine! 

But the part you have to be careful is how Carl is going to tell the OC or how the OC is going to tell Carl he/she feels about him/her.

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Anyways my point is, please make sure your fan-fictions makes sense! Try your best to not copy the show/movie/whatever.

Also try your very best for your fan-fiction to MAKE SENSE!

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A/N: So I made a Youtube account awhile back called The Whispers and I'm making my first video today about Dumb Fan-Fiction Moments.

It's basically alike to the book but I but my reactions to it and I'll sometimes be reading apart of a fan-fic.

I'll tell you when I publish the video, but if you want to subscribe to my channel now so you don't have to wait for the update your more then welcome to!

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