So it came to my attention
The chapter Morning After Mess didn't do well.
Many commented about Payu assaulting Rain in the smut.
I tried to explain that Payu and Rain’s sexual relationship and fantasies are different .
Payu knows when Rain actually doesn't like it , it was supposed to be mutual understanding between them.
Which i tried to portray by emotions
But I guess it failed badly. I apologize for my mistake .
So i changed the whole smut making it more verbal and consensual
Highlighting on those words purposefully.
I told you all I listen to your concerns and do the changes.
And for smuts ahead I'll make sure to keep this in mind and make consent more verbal.
You can go and read that chapter again if you wish too.
Thank you and sorry from my side
I regret to portray the emotions not well and making it look like assault.
Meet you in next chapter
And if you have more issues you can write it below.
Except More Payu Rain request
I already told you it's on the way.
The chapter is moving according to each cp confession.
Payu Rain part has already started so please wait for it🙏🙏
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