chapter 30

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" Caroline you have a note. " said mother as soon as I sat on the dining table. " From whom? " I asked her with a smile . I didn't get notes here soo often who it can be?

" From Mrs Florisha Moonstar. She has invited our family for dinner. says its for enjoying poetry and music " she said handing me the note.

I took the note from her and read it. She is right, it is a dinner invitation. Well, I thought I almost lost the business deal. I am very happy. Money goddess is still blessing me.
" well that's nice news....isnt it being invited by Moonstars. " I told her. I placed the note neatly in my purse. And...now to focuson on my food.

" someone looks very happy... for a family like Moonstar you're too happy " said Mr Darcy joining us at the breakfast table. was he listening us silently. Well I didn't push the matter.

" They're rich, have class, Have two young bachelor man and have a nice big estate... Shouldn't I be happy Mr Darcy? Isn't it a very nice catch for me? " I asked him, I dont know why I love teasing him. I don't know why he reacts like that...but I like his reaction.

" I dont think Moonstars are that rich to be a good catch. And you call that an estate. And if you want an invitation from a good place haven't you heard of pemberley before?... My sister can... And is inviting you. why worry about such small estate? " said Mr Darcy. I don't know why all of a sudden whole table is silent. Every eye on us.

" well, I am honoured Mr Darcy. I am looking forward to meet with your sister. But this invitation is different..." I told him still with a teasing smile.

" How so? " asked Mr Darcy.
" why not... I am a young girl. I should be happy for invitation or parties. Specially with young bachelor man present...shouldnt I be happy? " I told him.

" You're from an elite family, must care for your status. " said Mr Darcy. Well I dont have time to listen him talk. I suddenly got a brilliant idea and I have to work according it. Mrs Bennett you should thank me handsomely.

Mr Hurts ( pov )

" Well, I have to decide what to wear so enjoy your breakfast and excuse me. " said Miss Caroline and left.
" Excuse me " said Mr Darcy and left few minutes after her.

" what just happened? " asked Mrs Bingley. " your daughter is blind. " said my wife to her mother. " Trust me both are blind. " said Mr Bingley and I agree with him.

" Did Mr Darcy just indirectly proposed her? " asked Mrs Bingley.
" Indirectly...he asked loud and clear...your daughter didn't take the hint. " Said Mr Bingley to her.

" He said his estate is big, he can invite....isnt it saying I am more rich marry me. " Said my wife. " I don't understand young ones this days...so much unaware of everything " said my wife.

Cant they see how much they like each other. And its such a beautiful match. Miss Bingley can't be that blind as not to not see that Mr Darcy openly proposed her.

" I believe Miss Bingley has some plans...but I think we old bones have to help them together " I said and they all nodded. " You're right...I have to do something about it. " Said my wife.

Caroline ( POV )

As I entered my room it changed into something else. A total different place. Its a huge monitor room type, With a big screen. And a huge floating glass table infront of it.

" Traveler, our system was down for a long time. So we couldn't watch over the land. " Came a electronic voice. What is it? where am I?

" who are you?" I asked it. No one is visible in the screen just a volume line visible. " I am not a person. I am a system....System075. Since you arrived here...you have changed the story a lot.....but the main characters of a story can't be changed " said the system.

" I just wanted Caroline to have a better life thats it. Nothing more. " I told the system. " You can make her life better but can't change the main couple. Darcy must marry Elizabeth. The story must be in order. " Came the metallic voice again.

Even I wanted the story to be back in its original state. But now I don't know why I don't want it. " Can't Caroline have him for once?" I asked almost in a whisper.

" No, in story world no one would want that. But since the question is asked...I will start a vote on it. If you get 100 votes...than the story can change or never. Till than try to fix what you messed up. " came the metallic voice again.

" Don't do things you're not suppose to do. " Came another command. " I wish you stayed broken..." I shouted but I am back in my room. No screen, no monitor....my warm room. I don't know when I started to fall for Mr Darcy...and now that I did. I have to lose him.

Its a story book of course the main characters can never change. It was my stupid thinking that I am here in such a state. Well, I have to focus on my work. And when they marries I will leave the place and settle somewhere else.

But I still wish that stupid system gets 100 votes...which is a big dream. But I want to wish about it a little. I sat down to write a little letter for my friend to send lydia back. I have some good ideas for her.

I finished writing the letter and gave it to the housekeeper to send.
" Already exchanging love letters are we?" came Mr Darcy's voice. " Isn't it too early for that?" he asked.

" Its not a love letter...even if it is...what is it to Mr Darcy?" I asked him. " I am curious...spill the tea. Who is that lucky fellow? Getting letters from carol. " he asked and took the letter from our housekeeper and read the name.

His expression changed, he handed back the letter to the housekeeper. " Go " he commanded. The housekeeper left. " Your...what was it..starmoon..no...moonstar..wouldnt mind if I tag along right. He cannot be that stingy can he? well, I am tagging along..." he said and left. I am not understanding anything anymore...what should I do???

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