The valley noticed before the household did.
It was not the sort of change that arrived with thunder or fire. There was no single morning when the world declared that Tang Su Su Yuyan had become impossible to hide. Instead, the signs came quietly, folded into ordinary days, easy to dismiss until they gathered too thickly to ignore.
Spring began arriving earlier around Old Master Wei's estate.
At first, Nainai blamed the southern winds. Old Master Wei blamed the slope of the valley and the way the mountains held warmth. Mojing blamed nothing aloud, though his eyes lingered too long on the plum tree whenever it bloomed before the last frost had vanished.
Bai Qian knew better.
The plum blossoms opened for Su Su.
So did the wildflowers along the path to the stream. So did the peach saplings planted near the kitchen wall. So did the stubborn patch of medicinal herbs that should not have survived winter but somehow returned greener each year.
By fifteen, wherever Su Su lingered, life leaned closer.
Birds nested beneath the eaves and refused to startle when she walked past. Deer stepped into clearings when she gathered herbs, lowering their heads as though recognising her. Children from nearby villages who met her once remembered her for months. Even the sick seemed calmer in her presence, their breathing easing before her hands ever touched them.
Su Su noticed some of it.
Not enough.
That worried Bai Qian more than if the girl had noticed everything.
One evening, near the beginning of summer, Bai Qian found Su Su beside the stream washing vegetables for dinner. The light had softened into gold. Fireflies blinked in the reeds. The water moved over stones with its usual quiet music, carrying fallen petals downstream from the orchard.
Su Su sat on a flat rock with her skirts gathered carelessly around her knees, sleeves rolled up, a basket of greens beside her. Her hair had slipped loose again, dark strands falling over one shoulder. General lay nearby in the grass, pretending to guard her while half-asleep.
At first, the scene looked entirely ordinary.
Then Bai Qian noticed the fish.
They had gathered in the shallows near Su Su's bare feet, drifting there as though the current itself had drawn them. A kingfisher perched on a branch above her shoulder. A rabbit had crept from the undergrowth and sat so still among the roots that anyone else might have mistaken it for a stone.
Su Su hummed softly as she rinsed the vegetables, entirely unaware that the forest had arranged itself around her.
Bai Qian stopped several paces away.
A strange ache opened beneath her ribs.
The child she had first met beneath the plum tree—mud on her sleeve, blossoms in her hair, asking why a stranger smelled like foxes—was still there. Bai Qian could see her in the tilt of Su Su's head, in the absentminded way she talked to animals, in the way she smiled when General huffed in his sleep.
But something else stood beside that child now.
A young woman.
Powerful.
Beloved.
Dangerous without ever intending to be.
"You are staring," Su Su said without turning.
Bai Qian blinked.
"You noticed?"
"You breathe differently when you are worried."
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Choices and Consequences
FanficThis story has been swirling around my head for quite some time but I couldn't find the courage to write it because I am no writer. Nevertheless, I have decided to take the plunge to just get it out of my head. This story is based on my favourite...
