Flaws in Fanfics Percy Jackson Edition

Daughter of Artemis

Hi I'm Luna hunter Wolf Moon and as you can guess I'm a daughter of Artemis and I'm blessed by all the gods since I saved Olympus I'm also a magician and I host all the gods
I looked into the mirror at my reflection I had long black hair and silver orbs my skin was pale. I was wearing a silver shirt with jeans I tied my hair in a money and went to meet my best friend Mystic corner who's a daughter of Hecate and she like me is blessed by all the gods so we started training and I fought Annabeth (I absolutely hate her) and totally beat her and Percy came running to me like
"OMG WILL YOU MARRY ME"
I said yes then Chiron called us for the new prophecy
Three shall go to kill Gaea one shall die and two shall live they will get married and one will live forever
So Chiron sent Annabeth Percy and me
I hope Annabeth dies and me and Percy get married and I live forever and little du I know it was true I killed Gaea again Annabeth was so weak she died after two battles me and Percy had kids
Charlie moon Jackson and Charlotte moon Jackson they were twins and I became immortal