Flaws in Fanfics Percy Jackson Edition

Luna winner

Winner is Writer_4ever

Sup. My name Luna Hunter Wolf Moon

Percy- this world.......is rotten

Light-IKR u wanna kill al da filth with me

Percy-I'll pass

Me- LIGHT GET OUT OF HERE

Light- fine

and I'm daughter of Artemis.

Artemis- *grabs Apollo* come one time to go

Apollo- fine

Both-*jump into Tarturus

So I was walking around Camp Half-Blood on a normal day getting compliments and swoons from every boy that passed by me,

All boys- oh well the only compliment you'd get from us is........NOTHING

Leo- all males clear out stay away from the Luna I repeat stay away from the Luna this is not a drill
it was a normal day for me. My boyfriend Percy Jackson

Percy- Annabeth please please kill her

Annabeth- *looks up from dead body of Luna * huh

(He was so hawt)

Malcolm-*throws dictionary *

came up to me and began making out with me.

Jason-*covers Nico and Hazels eyes* this is something you shouldn't see

Nico-*swats Jason's hand away* I'm technically older than you

Hazel-me too

Jason-*recovers both of their eyes* well you're to innocent

Nico -........you do know I'm emo right..........

Annabeth was looking at us, I knew this because of my super-inhuman-senses to detect whenever someone would be shooting bad looks at me.

Grover- that *chews on aluminum can * would be a nice ability

Or whenever they were looking at me in general.

Grover- That too

All of the sudden Zeus came up to me and said, "We need your help Luna Hunter Wolf Moon!"

Zues- like that would ever happen

Poseiden and Hades-*in soliloquy* for once I agree

All of the gods loved me and would do just about anything for me.

Athena-*grabs le master bolt* DIE INSOLENT MORTAL

He said that Gaea was rising again,

Leo- all my work.......for......nothing

so I went on a quest and defeated Gaea
by showing her my good looks.

Aphrodite-DIE INSOLENT SCUM YOU HAVE NO BEAUTY

She was totally loving me and decided to fall asleep because I asked her to.

Piper-*eye twitch * HEY I DID THAT

I then went back to camp and made out with Nico and Percy.

Hazel-*deep breath * you

Bianica- shall

Thalia-now

Reyna- die *snarl*

(At the same time)

Me-*pukes* OH GODS. EWWWWWWWW

I know, I'm so pretty and talented and smart.

Piper- just keep telling yourself that until you drown into the pits of despair once realizing the painful truth where no one shall reach out and help

Jason-.......*meek voice* Pi....per

The gods came down and partied with the entire camp, making me the guest of honor.

Zues- ANNABETH CHASE YIU HAVE DONE A GREAT DEED BY KILLING THIS ACCURSED MORTAL