Vampire Cinderella

Hey guys! I was bored and a weirdly enough I was thinking about Cinderella. Well you all know how there's so many many versions of the story. Sorry but here's another one. This is my version. Sorry if you think it's silly but it just came to me. Any-who let me know what you guys think. Love ya guys!!

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Ever heard of the phrase "once upon a time", well that overrated. Come on people this isn't your typical fairy tale so lets start it off in a different way.

Now our story takes place in a little city called, Hocking Dream. The city is know to be the place where dreams come true, ugh that's not the case. It's more like where dreams are crushed. You can't go in the streets at night unless you want to be found dead in the alley the next week. So don't let the name fool you.

Now on with the story, the year is 1872. It is a time where you will hear the tale of a witch burned on the stake and the vampires will have you for supper, you might want to believe those silly tales for they are true. You might be wondering now why hasn't the story started? Well Ill tell you that's it's just beginning, so don't get your fangs in a twist.

There is a little girl that goes by the name of Ell. Her mother died of child birth, so the little sweetheart lives with her dearest father. Her father loves with all his heart and would give his life for her. Sadly that is exactly what he did. When Ell was at the age of 15 her father made a deal with vampires, that they take his life but spare his daughters. Vampires are not the creatures to do business with. They did not exactly kill the young girl. After murdering her father, they turned her into a vampire as them. They made her there servant for all eternity. As heart broken of her fathers death she did as told. Suffering to never dance in the sun, never grow old, never fall in love, just doing as told.

1944

"Ell get your sorry ass down hear or I will throw you in the sun. Get down here now!!!!" I was woken to the yelling of her mistress Merna. Using my vampire speed she was now standing in front of her mistress. "Yes your lady ship, what is the matter?" Merna rolled her eyes in disgust, "oh don't be an innocent bitch! You know what you did! I know it was you that gave donated blood to the humans." I was shocked ever little thing I get blamed for by her stupid daughters. "Pardon me my lady. I will bring you fresh, better blood. What do you wish to have?" She smirked but seemed satisfied to get under my pale skin. "We wish for the blood, of a human. Choose who ever as long as you don't go with a homeless piece of......" " right away your lady ship. Do you also wish for anything else while I am out?" She had to think for a moment, I'm surprised she can with nothing in her head. "No that will be all, and don't even think about eating our breakfast you may only kill it." I nodded my head, "yes my lady."

As soon as the sun was down I stepped outside with my red and black cloak. No one ever finds me suspicious for some reason. I was quite hungry myself, I'm not allowed to feed on the humans when I am bringing them one. Sadly I hunt for rats, they have a bitter taste but it keeps me barely undead. I pick the humans that are disrespectful and don't deserve to live, so basically drunk ass men, self centered women, and the ones who abuse. Some people stopped believing in vampires around 1920. Easy to hunt without getting a stake to the heart. "Excuse me miss, but could I trouble you for some spare change?" I turned to see a young man early thirties at the latest and drunk as hell. "Sir I'm terrible sorry but I do not have any spare change. " he chuckled, "could you follow me. I wish to show you something. " I'm a vampire so nothing can really hurt me. So I followed him.

"So what's a beautiful young lady like you doing in the streets? Surely your husband is somewhere around." I shook my head, "I have no husband, I'm a maid for the vamp family." He looked amused, "oh surly that's not true. Are you here alone tonight?" I nodded. "Good then no one will come to hear you scream.!" All of a sudden he's no longer acting like he's drunk now he has fangs out. He's a vampire!  

"Your---ur-- a vamp----ire?" He looked more amused, "yes honey I am, now hold still so I won't make a mess." Good that got him thinking I'm human guess its time to bring out my fangs. "Shit! Your a vampire too." He fell back obviously surprised, "huh that's strange I'm sure the fangs told you. You must be really dumb to ask that."

Now he was angry. He grabbed hold of me and threw me against the wall. "Such a pretty mouth of yours, but it has a little too much to say. Lets straighten that out shall we." He pressed his lips against mine, I was in too much shock to realize what happened. I pushed him away and ran from him. Stupid I know. I grabbed the first human I saw, not really caring who it was. I quickly bit the human and went back as fast as I could go. I heard him shout, "you can run! But I will find you, don't think otherwise!" I went flying into the castle I didn't realize that I bumped into Elliot. Christine one of mistresses daughters 'boyfriend'. I think I got him pretty pissed off. He shoved me against the wall, watch were your going you clumsy bitch!" He shouted and slapped me hard across the face.

I fell to the ground, crying blood. Vampires don't cry tears but blood. I whipped them away and went to deliver the human to my mistress. She seemed pleased then sent me off. I haven't eaten in three days I really needed blood. I went out back, lucky for me I found two rats. There easy to catch. While I was feeding I was disturbed by Christine. She slapped me hard across the face and took my meal away. "Eliot told me you pushed him. Better be careful or you will see the sun." She stormed back into the house leaving me alone. I wish this pain would end.

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Hey so tell me what you guys think, I know it's pretty weird but I thought it was something different and thought why not try it. So if you guys like it ill post another chapter if not ill delete it. I want your guys honest thoughts. You'll find out next week if there is another chapter. Sorry if you don't like it i was pretty much half asleep when I wrote this. Hope you liked it though.