December 31, 2015 - 3 hours before 2016 arrives, sneaking off a bit of writing.
Anyway. . .
Yep. You saw it correctly.
When you write a story, be sure to polish your grammar.
Don't make an excuse that it's english isn't your first language,
that you're too young,
still a beginner,
and yada yada yada. . .
Practice makes perfect. And don't be afraid to make mistakes.
Oh & don't be stubborn with advice from other people's critique in your story.
Instead of bawling out from a harsh critique, use that to whip up a good story even more.
Now here are my tips for finding an editor here in Wattpad for free. Yes for free (no monetary) but with watty money. lols, If you've read my first rant about the covers, you'd understand this.
1. Go to the "Community" section (if you're using the laptop)
2. Go to the "Improve Your writing" section.
3. You'd see the Editor's section thread, you can find an Editor there, If you like someone, then PM them.
4. I would also recommend you to go to my "Elite Editing & Critique Services" which is in my works.
- Okay why? I've always had difficulty with finding editors. And so, that's why I've organized a bunch of awesome writers who is willing to do work for our club. It's all a one-stop thing, you don't have to look so far anymore.
A NO NO IN YOUR STORY
1. Don't you just hate it when you see a good cover, a good blurb, then you see that it has like 188888k reads (lol okay, I'm exaggerating, but you get my point) but when you start reading, they forget about the basic grammar of how to use exclamation point, punctuation, commas and such? It's just a big turn off.
When that happens, I just take it off my library, losing my interest all at once. Unless you're a really good friend, and I want to help you with your story.
2. Don't overdo your "............" it should be only three. You can also do this, "Hi you're very beautiful, but. . ." (According to Miss JMFelic, most published authors uses that) or like this, "I like you, but...", okay? Okay.
3. Fix your dialogue.
Example.
"She is so radiant," Gabriel looks at Raven with appraisal in his green eyes, and then he sighs, "she just takes my breath away."
not like this,
"She is so radiant" Gabriel looks at Raven with appraisal in his green eyes. and then he sighs "she just takes my breath away" or any grammatical murders.
I mean, I'm no grammar Nazi, we're all striving to be good. So why not push it further?
Go, I urge you to find an Editor. ^_^
Or a critique, to know if you want to know a second opinion about your story.
I hope this helps.
Good luck! :)

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