Elite's Advice, tips & etc.

Blurb

I knew "Summary" but not blurb. 
First time I heard this from a friend, Welc0meT0MyW0rld, I was like, "Errrr what do you mean?" 

HAHAHAHAHAHA!

Oh so it's actually the summary.

So yeah, another thing is. . . if you have awesome blurb. Then you're right on track.

It should contain:

1. The info or what people would see in your story.

2. But don't reveal too much. 

3. Please don't be cliche, and start with "This is a typical girl, or a normal girl." 

Example blurbs that are awesome

From DameerK on "Fixing Your Heart"

Blurb:

This is a story of a boy who entrusted everything to his new found best friend,

 his secrets,

his bad deeds,

mistakes, 

and his whole heart to one person.

This is a dream to every Muslim boy, who wishes to meet someone that would remind him of making good deeds, and that can make him better in every perspective in his life. Dameer Khalaf has 1 semester left in his college life at a certain University. He was always a lazy devil, and not very good in expressing his feelings and thoughts, not until he fell in love with someone he never thought of falling for-- Summer Zahara Fox Talil, which was his best friend's high school ex.

 "I shouldn't have said it, but I did it."

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From JMFelic on "Sanctum"

"Silence your tongue Aurora."He promptly commanded before he cupped her chin and pressed his palatable lips into her mouth.

It was a whirlwind of chaos. Her mouth was covered entirely with his own. He savagely torpedoed his tongue and flicked and sparred it with hers until she moaned in protest. She pushed his chest forcefully back but he only seized her hands and pinned them on the door.She moaned again, this time feeling breathless. He didn't give her any respite even with this however. He used his power to control the air and ordered it to fill her lungs with enough oxygen so that she wouldn't faint of asphyxiation.

And the wind did so accordingly, ultimately giving him the much needed time to claim her mouth more leisurely.He haven't tasted this kind of sweet nectar ever before. The longing about it... the yearning for more... the feeling of exploding was so tangible against her skin.So this is what humans call...desire.

 ~ S ~

An exorcist priest that is assigned by Sancta Sedes to exorcise demons from every continent. He must obey the Holy Pope, the episcopal see of the Bishop of Rome, whatever the cost is due to a very dark secret only him, a few bishops in the Holy Council and the Holy Pope knows about. 

And this time, the Holy Pope instructs him to go in the City of Soren to investigate a recent demoniacal attack in an orphanage house of St. Therese. Demons are everywhere. Those that are powerful enough to break through the barrier, are hiding on plain sight. But those lesser demons with a horrendous appetite for human soul, lingers on the barrier for exact opportunities. They just needed the right time and the right place to surface on earth. The St. Therese Charity House is a good exit point especially when a woman residing there holds the key to their freedom.

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and from my most favorite writer of all time, the reason why I even joined fictionpress.com in the first place! hiro0911 from "Fist and Lipsticks 2: The silver Crescent"

Blurb:

Having survived the airport bombing, Yoshida Ayane returns to Japan eight years later as big-time Chinese hotelier, Lady Nu Huang, and plots a fiery revenge against the Spectra Gang. Her past left her with a tarnised soul and fists craving for the perfect reprisal. Every debtor has to pay. The carnage in the blazing inferno is just the begining. 

 But what is the price of revenge? A heart that thrives on hate? Eyes that could shed no tears? What if the new Spectra leader turns out to be no other than her high school lover, Yamazaki Kosuke? What would she choose: revenge or love? 

 This is a story of chase, betrayal, vengeance, glow-in-the-dark stars, and lost love.

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Well aren't they great?