The love I once had

CHAPTER ONE

I was was in a 5th grade class in a little city called castaway .The year was 2010 and my life was about to change.
it was lunch, me and my friend Brian who knew each other for quite a while where talking. After lunch was over I sat in class looking around when the teacher shouted MAX!!!! Ah I shouted back the class laughed at me. The teacher said, "Max can you tell us what's A times 2."Uh I forgot to study." Like for the test that the teacher said we had to study for today. Thinking with my tiny little brain my "friend" Brian he's a life saver passed me the test and I copied it all on my test.
Next day I was bored until something caught my eyes, she was here caring her text books, great black hair and beautiful eyes and shiny white teeth.
                their was an empty seat next to me that's where she was going to sit. My heart was excited I did not know what to say. After 2minutes she introduced her self saying hello my name is grace nice to meet you. Oh I said hi I'm max nice to meet you"I looked at her one last lime before I left home. I was riding my bike home happy and and excised I jumped on my bed with a smile on my face"it was 8:00 in the afternoon I was at the dinner table with my family. Max asked my dad anything you learned at school oh yes I replied,I actually  got a new student in my class.dad said tell us who"I said a girl named grace I don't know much about her but il see if we can be friends.The next day I was in my   
             Class When a bullie came and said hey you, I what money so give me yours I told him please no I need it for my "lunch" oh well. He was just abut to hurt me when grace shouted leave him alone.the bullie ran off grace ran to me and said are you" ok I said yea. Years went on and on and on the 16 birth day for grace and max and grace kissed for the very first time".Max was 17 and grace she was 16 .They where
In a high school called Stefan high school  and yes the school was Bigger"than their old elementary.they lived happily they love to go out side on adventures.i remember that we have to swing on a rope over a river to go to the other side.One day grace and Max thought that they could go to their favorite place to go deep into the woods  and to go you have to go over a river through a bush up a hill and their you've arrived' oh grace and Max loved each other so much.Until it was not to be when grace was going over the rope it snapped and ripped in half which made grace fall and crack her skull opens Max quickly grabbed her and called the ambulance as quick as possible. Max was crying on a chair next to a door a doctor came out to say she"ugh she didn't make it. Ah!! I crude like I never had before she was out out of my life forever. 20years later I live in a house with no wife one adopted child to live with me.Il never forget that day she left this world.                                             

(This is my first book so take it 1ittle_easy)