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This is a joke. I'm purposley making them bad and Mary-Sues. I'll probably do this again in the future.

Name: Jess the Killer
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Weapon: Knife
Hair Color: Black with red highlight
Hair Style: Shoulder length, kind of Emo like style, wild and crazy
Eye Color: Solid black
Signature Outfit: White hoodie, black leggings, black tennis shoes
Signature Saying: It's time to sleep....
Siblings: Jeff the Killer
Parents: Can't remember them
Tattoos: None
Body Mods: Nose ring
Killings Method: Stabs in chest with knife, whispering saying in their ear as they slowly fade away
Other Stuff: Is Slender's Proxy
Backstory: Jess grew up with her brother Jeff, both of them close. When Jeff killed their family, he spared her and asked if she wanted to join him. She said yes, and grabbed a kitchen knife to use as a weapon. Then they ventured to the mansion that they knew it'd exact placement of. Slender accepted Jess immediately, and made her his Proxy. She kills so that her brother doesn't kill her, and to make Slender happy.

TIME FOR ME TO CRITICIZE MY SARCASTIC OC! Okay, stupid reason to kill. Why is she siblings with Jeff and not Liu. Why did Jeff spare her. Why is she Slender's proxy. Why did she know the exact placement of the mansion. Why are her eyes solid black. That saying is such a ripoff. That killing method is so overused. Knives are also overused. AGGGHHH IT'S SO TERRIBLE I'LL DIE!!!!

Name: Sabrina who Murders
Age: 1.5 years
Gender: Unknown
Weapon: Knifu (knife)
Hair Color: Glittery puke pink
Hair Style: Long, drags on the floor for twenty feet behind her
Eye Color: Rainbow
Signature Outfit: Bright purple mini dress and black heels
Signature Saying: You've met with a terrible fate, haven't you? So it's time to go to sleep, even though you'll never wake up. Your time has run out, go to sleep. . .
Siblings: All the pastas in the universe
Parents: Slenderman
Tattoos: Proxy symbol on back of neck
Body Mods: Nose ring
Killing Method: Stags with knife while screaming her saying repeatedly before gouging their eyes out
Other Stuff: Is a proxy and a witch
Backstory: Sabrina ran away when she was one with a knife after murdering her parents and writing the saying on the wall and changing her name to Sabrina the Murderer she ran into the woods and met her long lost siblings the pastas and long lost father Slenderman who made her his proxy and she murders

I'll let you guys "review" (a.k.a. rant) about her

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