School, Prejudice and Survival

Sorry : A/N

So, I've never done an official authors note before and I hoped that I never would but it would bring me some peace of mind to say this. 

I know not many people read my story but if there is someone who is, just take note of the fact that I am unhappy with this story so far. I am trying to push too many messages into it and its becoming kind of a mess, but I have my entire life to edit it. 

I am also currently putting this book under major maintenance, my main goals being these things:

1. To reduce characters (eg. Harriet and Hannah are no longer in this story, they didn't have much to do with it anyway. Tell me if there is a random mention to a character you have never heard of, that may just be something I missed whilst editing.) In the future, I will be removing other characters as well. There are too many and I don't like it.

2. To add descriptions. I never stop to describe a person or place and I need to start that now.

3. To clean up the plot line so far. I have a basic idea of how this story is going to go, and it involves romance, conflict and quite a few random life teachings. I will be adding to Indie's survival list and she will spend more time with important characters.

Also just a quick note within a note: I keep a small book with all my ideas jotted down in it so this isn't entirely random. I just need to sort it out a bit.

I'm dedicating the rest of today to going through my book and listing all the problems I have with it, and fixing them. The entire thing will be updated again soon, so just bear with me!