Equinox (twilight fanfiction)

Quest 1

I saw this song on YouTube and I thought I was perfect for this scene. The song is called Exit Calypsan (Only in my Dreams). It's so awesome. This song is dedicated to Queen Jadeanne.

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Lelani's POV:

Jadeanne was sitting in a spring under a waterfall wearing deer skinned bikini. She grinned at me. I looked down at myself. I was wearing a green bikini and my hair was longer than naturally. It followed down to my thighs. She looked exactly like me except her eyes were black and mine are brown. Also she looked like she was in her twenties. She swam up to me. I sat down on the edge of the spring. "Welcome, sister to my home. I see you have met our father, Marcus." She greeted. I shrugged. "I want you to let me take over. I will give you back control when I'm finished destroying those bloodsuckers. You see our father destroyed my tribe. I have been waiting 873 years to come back. And I intend on doing just that. I want to see my father burn to nothing... not even ash."

"But I thought I was supposed to become an immortal."

"We are already immortal, child."

"No, you are. I'm not. I'll be turning 14 in three months."

"When you fulfill the prophecy, we will become one and you will attain my immortality."

"What if I don't want that?" I countered. She jumped into the air and pulled me into the water. She was laughing when I came up for air. I glared at her. Jadeanne swam up to me. She was staring at her glowing palms. She told me to sit on the rock. I swam to the edge and ran up the mountain. I sat on a steady rock.

Jadeanne came out of the water, her entire upper body was glowing a gold color. She ran up the mountain using inhuman speed. When she got to me, she pressed her palms over my heart. She focused on her energy and I felt her hands go inside me. I screamed out as she pushed her way into my body. She kissed my forehead. "I know this hurts but you need to trust me in order for us to work as a team." She said as her arms went through. I tried to grab hold of something but the rock was to rough to grip on. Under me the ground grew veins and roses with thorns. As Jadeanne took over my body.

Alec's POV:

Lelani began to stir. She opened her eyes and the eyes that met mine were not Lelani's deep brown but her ancestor's eyes, Queen Jadeanne. I pushed Marcus off her. He scowled at me. The evil witch inside Lelani grinned at everyone. "Hello father." She greeted as she walked casually toward Marcus. Her voice was identical to Lelani's and her quarks were the same as well. She turned to me and grinned. "So you are the doppelganger's little playmate. Don't worry little Lelani is completely safe." She laughed at me. I snapped attacking her from the side. She dodged me and grabbed me by my neck. She sunk her nails into my hard cold skin.

Suddenly someone was banging on the door. Jadeanne sniffed the air and smiled. She dropped me. She used my gift to cut off our senses. I wasn't sure if I was dead or alive when she did this to us. Now I see how my victims feel like before we kill them. When she gave us back our senses. We realized she was gone. She escaped. What are we going to do now? Marcus decided to change Harper. Felix carried her as the venom took over her body, shutting the system down. Demetri looked at Harper longingly and with something I thought I would ever see, love. He is falling for this young one. Demetri tracked down a good place to put Harper. But Felix noticed how Demetri felt about leaving her to destroy the town when she wakes up. Felix volunteered to take Harper back to Voltera. Marcus knew that this battle in Washington will only be of mental gifts. Therefore, he would not need Felix or the Harper. Since Demetri is the best tracker on earth he has to stay. Demetri took Felix aside. He gave Felix a letter to give to Harper when she wakes up. He volunteered to train Harper which was huge. Demetri usually hates taking care of newborns yet with Harper he is eager to spend time with her.

After Felix and Harper left, Demetri began leading us back to the direction Lelani/Jadeanne is. Marcus was determind to find her. Jane was incredably bored. Kyle thought of this as a game. I was just worried. I want to find her and hold her. I want to keep her from all harm including herself and myself.

Brady's POV:

When we found Lelani, we knew it wasn't her. I even tried to get Lelani back but it didn't work. That evil witch forced us to follow her. Nemo didn't like taking orders from this Pris okay well, most of us didn't, okay none of us did. Can you blame us? She's so shrill and has no love in her. She is all mouth and power. There is nothing else in this woman. I miss Lelani. Why did she have to let this evil witch take over her body?

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sorry it's not as long as it usually is I have been so busy lately

I really need some feedback about the storyline

Has this become more of a TVD fanfiction than a twilight one?

Should I bring back the Cullens?

Should I incorporate the romance part now or should I keep going with the action?

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Sincerely,

Lina Nephtali Hartly