A Light in the Darkness (a Solangelo FanFiction)

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Okay guys I need your advice. So a few of you have stuck with this story even since the beginning and I couldn't love you more for it. This question is for you guys. The previous girl Eraina and the girl that was spoken of in the last five seconds of the chapter are going to make another appearance sometime near the end of the book. I realize it can get annoying when Fan fiction writers write their own characters in and focus on them but I was wondering, should I give Eraina her own chapter and/or make her a more prominent character?
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I rushed through the hospital.

Why was I worrying so much?

He had more time then this I knew that... Was it more than that?

Maybe I just wanted to see him again.

Also it didn't seem to go anywhere which as a fourteen year old, I loved.

Just spending time with Nico, that's all I cared about.

The way I saw it love wasn't about giving everything
to the other person, it was about loving them, it was about loving him.

I found myself walking towards the shadiest part of camp but then caught myself, "Nico's not a shady person!" I scolded myself.

I scanned the camp from the infirmary.

I saw Hermes and Apollo kids playing basketball.

I had never really understood basketball which was weird for a child of Apollo and Eraina didn't either.

She was never into sports.

That was the beginning to why we became friends.

Over to the right Satyrs were frolicking in the strawberry fields.

I continued scanning.

Then I saw a prominent red flannel, Eraina's prominent red flannel.

I walked towards her.

She had just gotten up.

She had been at the beach.

It seemed like she had been talking to someone.

I walked briskly in that direction but...

My curiosity got the better of me when I saw a blonde girl in black skinny jeans and a sports jacket walk up to Eraina.

I had never seen the girl before and that caught me.

I pretty much knew at least of everyone and the fact that she was talking to my little sister made me even more curious.

(One year younger sure but I'm possessive of her okay)

I turned to follow.

"Will?" A voice called.

There was Nico leaning against a sand dune.

All thoughts of Eraina left my head and I smiled sinking to a sitting position beside him.

"I missed you." Will whispered.

"I missed you too" Nico rested his head on Will's shoulder.

They sat there, Will's right arm wrapped around Nico's shoulders, Nico's left arm around Will's middle.

Their opposite hands intertwined.

Watching the sun descend over the water.

It was perfect and Nico never wanted the sun to disappear.