Maggie Mae Fanfic

Chapter 13

(Maggie's POV): I haven't seen John at school today. I thought he might be the kind of guy who skips school a lot, so I wasn't really worried.

Martha picked me up one hour after school.

Me and the girls was going to Blackpool in her new pink Cadillac.

I was wearing my favorite outfit, a skinny top and a skirt.

As soon as I got into the car they noticed my new necklace.

"Wow! Where did you get this?" asked Martha.

"John gave it to me" I replied happily.

The girls giggled.

"Oh my God, John is such a cutie!" Martha said as she tapped the wheel in the rhythm of the rock'n roll that was playing on the radio.

"I know right!" I said holding the necklace and they giggled again. I was sitting on the backseat with Rose.

"What about his friend? Paul?" she asked.

"Paul is a -" right in this moment we heard a horn.

We all turned around to see who was it.

John's car was behind Martha's. Inside it was John, Paul and George. John acellerated so now they were beside us. I opened the window.

"Where are you going?" I screamed above the wind's noise.

"Blackpool!" John said, screaming too.

I laughed and looked around, I just had an idea. I put my head out of the window.

"Maggie what are you doing?" Jane asked. I didn't answer.

I climbed up and now I was sitting in the window, half of my body out of the car. John's car kept the same velocity as Martha's. He new what I was going to do.

"Maggie, come back inside! This is dangerous!" said Martha.

I stood up, both of my feet in the window. I was holding on the antenna of Martha's car.

I heard John laughing and screaming. I laughed too.

"Maggie, we are in the middle of the road! For goodness's sake! What the fuck are you doing?" Rose screamed.

I put a foot carefully on the window of John's car.

Suddenly my top opened and the wind blew it away. I tried to catch it but it was too late.

Fuck.

But I couldnt stop now.

I opened my arms, closed my eyes and laughed. The wind on my face, the velocity, the danger. I never felt more alive. I screamed.

George's voice brought me back to reality.

"She's crazy" he said. I laughed.

Okay, now I needed to think. I needed to get inside John's car.

"George, help me" I said and held on the top of the vehicle. I put my right foot on the window and George pulled me in. I fell on the top of him, on the backseat. I was laughing so hard I couldn't breath. John and Paul were laughing too.

George looked horrified.

"This. was . fantastic!" John said.

"I know, I know" I laughed.

"Now Paul, give her your shirt. I don't want you two to look at my girlfriend" John ordered and I noticed My breasts were bare. I blushed tomato red, feeling exposed. "And I don't want George to be shocked. He never saw this woman things" John continued, laughing.

"Oh yeah, he won't sleep at night" Paul laughed as he took his shirt off and gave it to me.

Paul looked extremely sexy without his shirt. I dressed it, it felt comfortable and warm.

"Shut up" George said blushing. The boys bursted on laugh, except George, of course. I could barely keep my laugh in.

I looked outside and leant in the window, the girls were still looking at me in shock.

"See you in Blackpool" I screamed and waved as John accelerate.


















{idk I saw this once in a movie

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