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The Promise swear (winds leafs but comments stay forever) !.!

Hey guys my oldest sis gave me the ideal and I wrote it! WOW I loved it and it turned out better than I expected so I hope you like what I and my sister have created here it is please REaders of the world coome marvel at this piece of work and enjoy.....................it before its gone for good?............................................

Title: The Promise Swear

I looked at you dumbstruck at the accusations you set before me.

I knew what you always thought I didn't.

You thought I could not see that I was blind to the lie.

I watched your lips move, those crimson lips of yours.

They spoke of sorrow, and lost love they told me.

That you were truly sorry.

But were you now?

I saw you suffer as the actor of a play yet unknown, and unheard of.

I was the lead actress.

My gaze went upward toward your eyes.

They were telling me otherwise

Really they were smiling and I knew you thought you were brilliant too.

The promise swear.

You thought I would honestly simply believe you.

That I understood what you said as the truth.

Oh, and the ways I understood this one became the most clear to me.

I knew it was the most brutal in what it was really about.

I can see that you think I toke your confession.

But sadly your dead wrong.

The hurt in your empty hollowed eyes.

It's not real.

And that pity that you're giving me is as fake as the smile playing at your lips.

Bravo! I would say this is the best performance I have seen from you.

I wonder in my thoughts alone thinking

"Don't pity me sweet heart, when it should be the other way around."

But, yes to be honest I have seen it.

Every time lately when I looked at you so attentively.

Every fucking time.

When I saw you and your utterly bewitching breathtaking handsomeness.

I already knew it before this scene came to be...

Was your love for me, like the words you prayed I believe.

Faked and forced,

Or was your love a con for another con artist?

I looked at you and saw everything that you are,

and will become.

You convinced yourself so much you forgot to stop pretending.

I smile at you,

you poor detached creature.

I looked down at you now.

I am proud of this lesson I have learned.

The values you taught...

Who knew you would be so clever, and cunning.

I watched your face. I come close to you tip toes in all.

I whisper a sound so soft

you have to listen twice to catch it.

"Creatures like you belong below in the darkness where you should be left unseen."

I knew then that you never did quite get it did you?

Of all the things I knew about you.

This one I could prove to be full proof in more ways than one

It would hurt, your pride, and ego.

Then I kissed your cheek, leaving the lipstick mark and stepped down to

watch your face forcing the look of utter surprise.

That your words didn't work.

They did not sway me.

Now its me who's walking away with the truth whistling in my ears.

That its time to go...

Because this show just got its curtain call

and its ending with a final BRAVA! from the crowd below....

Well there it was I know thank you! thank you! haha _claps to self_ I know now dear people I need something from you a comment.. that is all, not roses I liked comments better tell me fav last lines and parts and all that Now I must be off for another greater show see yea later guys....