Comments please?

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hey there guys, I hate to say it, but I need more comments. I am getting almost no feedback, criticism or not, and I need this to get better. I'm not going to hold back from posting because of this, just keep it in mind that I DO want comments, I DO want criticism, especially criticism. I have three poems currently in draft, finished, I can post one of them on request (ignore my hypocrisy).

Please?

If you guys like I can make a contest or something, I'd love to see what you guys can do! 

~Sev

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