16 moons

My first change

I felt whispers in my ears. I try to open my eyes but they seem to be to heavy. I can here my mothers sweet voice. She says "Honey if you can here me, do something! Anything!" I could hear the desperation in her voice.




I managed to make a small movement with my fingers. I could hear a man voice reply " her mind is conscious, she heard us".




My mum gave an immediate reply, " Oh good, so she can come home, I will pack her bags" she sounded in need of something... maybe such as desperation or as if she was trying to hide something. How suspicious. The man voice replied with "not so fast! We don't know what's wrong with her yet, she must stay!"




My mum then stated "She is my daughter therefore my responsibility!" All in a few seconds it went from a conversation to a small argument. "Ma'am I must do say, it is the law in a medical emergency to do what the professionals say". I then heard a silence. I could feel my mothers breath on my skin. I heard her say under her breath "oh no".




I did indeed find it a bit peculiar.




It sounded as if I was in a hospital. I could hear my heart monitor. I laid there for about half an hour more.




It was quite boring not being body conscious, so I would just listen to the beat of my heart on the heart monitor




My mum was still by me. I could hear stuttering in her breath. what was going on? I thought.




I was beginning to become relaxed to the beat of my heart, after a while I notice that my hearts pace was speeding up... I have a feeling my mother did to, I could hear her whispering to herself. "Please, not now, not today!" It started as a whisper then merely became a shout. She continued to chant stop, each one getting louder. I didn't know what was going on! Im becoming more and more frightened by the minute. I can still hear her chant, but I feel that she's left my side, I hear a bang against the door and then a switch. She's locked the door. I was scared to death. What was going on?!?




The heart monitor was at least three beeps per second by now!




The doctors, I could hear them banging against the door. My mum, I could hear her panicking.




All these sounds! banging, chanting, screaming, beeping.. I can't take it!!!!




My mouth speaks! "ENOUGH!!!!" it was an evil sound, the deep voice of the devil! It went silent for a second, I heard my mums voice whisper.." Oh no".... At that moment I awakened! I could see, touch, feel, taste, hear. But I wasn't controlling my body. My clothes started to rip as I grew, what was happening!?! All of a sudden I could hear miles away! I had the vision of an eagle. I can't control it! The doctors scream, they begin sprinting for there lives. My mum lay on the floor leaning on her elbow, " Honey it's ok, I know your scared, I know you can't control yourself, but I can't explain now! I have to go get Uncle Rob! Honey just try not to hurt anyone!!!"




She got up and ran out the door. I was so scared I'm pretty sure that there's sugar honey ice tea in my pants!




More importantly, what has happened, who is controlling me?!?!?!




Whatever was controlling me was obviously pretty stupid! They were headed for the window that broke earlier in the growing process of whatever I am at the moment.




As they were headed to the window, I was scared, confused, desperate! What was I? Who was controlling me? WHAT IS HAPPENING? My body dragged itself along the floor, step by step. I walked past the reflection. A snout? Long claws? A tail? A long tongue? Rows of sharp teeth? Wait..? A-aa-am I a werewolf? This last question came to me as I took a step off the ledge. Obviously not physically but mentally I was screaming for my god damn life! It was so overwhelming that I thought for a second I was on my way to heaven!




"Crap" I manage to say. An I few seconds after that I hit the ground.

Am I dead?




Darkness flooded in...

























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So what did u guys think? I know my first chapter was crap as but am I improving? Any ideas on how I can improve?